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Looking forward to burry You

Contributed by remi on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:44:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



LOOKING FORWARD TO BURRY U



Dec 2, 03

I was watching a video about sucide and this father said this is not the order it suppose to be that the children burry their parent not the other way around

Well I'm looking forward to burry u I hope In your old age u find peace and happness and realize u did me wrong all these years never letting me shine always deming my light.

Well now does it feel that I'm getting fed up with all your *****. What is a man and what does it take to be one cause u don't know If u did u would have been a better father to me I think part of u know u were wrong, the both of u, but yall can't stop well I'm stopping u

Hope u realize that u sure have respect, believe in, wanted, and be there for me
I'm looking forward, we will be less in pain I'm looking forward to burry u, rest In peace father cause

I'm forward to proving u wrong to make it to the top with out you

I'm looking forward to burry you.

Remy Maskantinio






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Re: Looking forward to burry You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 03:01:52 AM AEST
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Very good analagy and thanks so much for the explanation up front.
Very creative thinking.
huggs, luv,
emy


Re: Looking forward to burry You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 03:02:03 AM AEST
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tears are streaming down my cheeks these feelings are known so well more than you will ever realize. Dont let anyone let your light cease to shine even if it is your father I know this pain I really do.
Read through some of my poetry over the last month you will see.
Hugs
michelle




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