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I'm losing
Contributed by
remi
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:26:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I'M LOSING
Nov, 3, 03
1:45 am
I'm losing my grip
I'm losing my dream
I'm losing my goal
I'm losing my happness
I'm losing my destiny
I'm losing my heart
I'm losing my light
I'm losing my self
I'm losing my beauty
I'm losing my spirit
I'm losing my soul
I'm losing my life
I'm losing my opportunity
I'm losing it
I'm losong myself more and more everyday they are like a over charge battery and I'm a car I'm gettin weaker and weaker and the gas is leaking out, there no more feud.
The light is backing out the tunnel
I'm drowning, the ocean is swalling me whole like jonah and the whale
Copyright ©
remi
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2004-01-24 02:26:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I'm losing
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 03:48:45 AM AEST (User
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Very impressive write!
U may b loosing but u speak like a scholer-n-write like a pro.
Very good, unique work of art.
hugs, luv,
emy
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Re: I'm losing
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheWildBeliever on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:27:23 AM AEST (User
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this poem has a nice feel to it, but i couldnt make out the message in it. is it literal? metaphorical? symbolic? |
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