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To the melody of a harp,
Sounding notes as sharp,
As broken pieces of glass,
The voice belongs to the one,
Angel with the cracked wings.

And striking the next tragic chord,
Tells his story of despair,
Within the house of the Lord,
His tears, turning to rain clouds,
Fill the lonely air,
The Father, the Spirit, the Son,
Listen to the angel regale,
Them with his mortal misery,
Stopping to sob and wail,
While glancing at the trinity.

With pure conviction in his eyes,
He leaves his gloomy seat,
Stretching, breaks the veneer off,
Of his ugly cracked wings,
Taking on a perfect form,
Sails away upon heavenly winds,
To cause another brilliant storm.
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The Angel with the Cracked Wings

Contributed by Contralogicus on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 01:46:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Up above a voice sings,
To the melody of a harp,
Sounding notes as sharp,
As broken pieces of glass,
The voice belongs to the one,
Angel with the cracked wings.

And striking the next tragic chord,
Tells his story of despair,
Within the house of the Lord,
His tears, turning to rain clouds,
Fill the lonely air,
The Father, the Spirit, the Son,
Listen to the angel regale,
Them with his mortal misery,
Stopping to sob and wail,
While glancing at the trinity.

With pure conviction in his eyes,
He leaves his gloomy seat,
Stretching, breaks the veneer off,
Of his ugly cracked wings,
Taking on a perfect form,
Sails away upon heavenly winds,
To cause another brilliant storm.

Copyright © Contralogicus ... [ 2004-01-24 01:46:34]
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Re: The Angel with the Cracked Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 01:55:57 AM AEST
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Amazingly beautifull!
Very vivid, dynamic, gentle, wise this
masterpeice!
Very powerfull in it's own beauty!
luv, hug, craked wing,
emy

Re: The Angel with the Cracked Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:13:14 AM AEST
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How very original.....and i'm so glad he was made well........i love poems that end with happiness......we have so much sadness to contend......this was a wonderful write my friend
lovingcritters.
consue

Re: The Angel with the Cracked Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:45:01 AM AEST
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simply beautiful such vivid detail and hope.
michelle

Re: The Angel with the Cracked Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by SpiketheBloody on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:45:26 PM AEST
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Well thought out mate, I'd like to read more poems about this angel. It could be a series of poems that tells of his adventures.

Re: The Angel with the Cracked Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 09:45:00 PM AEST
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Your left in suspense wondering whats going to happen next.... The descriptions are fantastic..."His tears, turning to rain clouds..." Wow this goes in the books.... The crack wing has significance to his misery... With "pure conviction in his eyes" I'm going to say he's out for revenge on something that happened to him that caused him to die. What a great story intro....well done

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