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Array ( [sid] => 32525 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Every day [time] => 2004-01-23 18:49:37 [hometext] => is a gray day [bodytext] => Gray Day
White sky
What would you say
If I found a cliff, one that is mighty and high
And took my life today
I heave a heavy sigh
Your silence always depresses me
Can you not see
My pain
My heart cries out your nameWhy must i always say you are my best-friend
But you never say that I am yours, when will this end?
Why can you not love me
Am I really that ugly?

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 39 [informant] => MissLee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Every day

Contributed by MissLee on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 06:49:37 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Gray Day
White sky
What would you say
If I found a cliff, one that is mighty and high
And took my life today
I heave a heavy sigh
Your silence always depresses me
Can you not see
My pain
My heart cries out your nameWhy must i always say you are my best-friend
But you never say that I am yours, when will this end?
Why can you not love me
Am I really that ugly?

Copyright © MissLee ... [ 2004-01-23 18:49:37]
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Re: Every day (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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Hi MissLee, Really glad you're still with us. wELL DONE. Poem was very good too.

Ali xx

Re: Every day (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 07:33:26 PM AEST
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Wellllll, love is not about just the looks, sometimes that special chemistry are lacked and no matter how you try, even if you get together for a short while, still, it not going to last long........ And to be honest, (*watching out for the flying eggs*) I think he done the right thing to NOT to tell you sweet lies which would make you fall deeper.......... I had been your spot myself, trust me, you will get over it........

Re: Every day (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:31:16 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry MissLee.....I don't know the trouble......but I can see from your very sad poem, he certainly isn't very considerate of you! Never cry over anyone that won't cry over you......they simply are not worth it...and will only hurt you time again!
Take you leave and be happy and free!
Please don't take you life for someone like him! Please.....we all love you too!
consue
lovingcritters
very sad, but great poem!

Re: Every day (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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THERE'S NO SUCH THING AS UGLINESS!
EVERYTHING & EVERYBODY HAS SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL ABOUT THEM!!
YOU SOUND LIKE A FLOWER IN THE SHADE,MEANING PULL THE SUNLIGHT OVER TO YOU,OTHERWISE IT MIGHT NOT!!!! GREAT POEM!!!!!

Re: Every day (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:29:19 PM AEST
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Love someone who will love you back
You are not ugly just because one person you want to love you does not feel the same it is all about the special chemistry together find some else to share yours with

Dont waste your love on some one who has at least been honest with you and said how he feels

You will find love again be willing to let him go and you will feel a lightness in your heart Start surrounding yourself with people who do love you your family friends it will pass love honest it will

Whilst you hold on to this past love other chances are passing you by in the blink of an eye
Your prince could be so near yet so far

Love Angelxxxx

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