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Array ( [sid] => 32518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain and Anguish [time] => 2004-01-23 17:55:59 [hometext] => This was written when I had some problems going on in my life.... [bodytext] => So much to think, yet I can hardly explain.
Why do you do this to me?
All you ever do is make me wonder.
What's next?

I can't believe you're torturing me,
All this pain you're putting me through.
I wish there was a way,
That you'd understand what you're doing to me.

I just don't tend to realize why you're doing this to me,
Let alone yourself
It confuses me
Like there's nothing that can go wrong.

I get confused by your words,
And I think about them forever
I try to get over the pain,
But even that makes it inferior.

You mean the world to me,
But I don't deserve this.
I deserve to be treated superior,
Like a human being.

I get stuck with a lot of pain,
My worry increases, as does the day
I love the thought of new images in my head,
But not of guilt and anguish.

That makes days worse,
i like the intriguing feeling,
That people trounce,
When happy thoughts race through their heads. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 25 [informant] => hawaii06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Pain and Anguish

Contributed by hawaii06 on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:55:59 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

So much to think, yet I can hardly explain.
Why do you do this to me?
All you ever do is make me wonder.
What's next?

I can't believe you're torturing me,
All this pain you're putting me through.
I wish there was a way,
That you'd understand what you're doing to me.

I just don't tend to realize why you're doing this to me,
Let alone yourself
It confuses me
Like there's nothing that can go wrong.

I get confused by your words,
And I think about them forever
I try to get over the pain,
But even that makes it inferior.

You mean the world to me,
But I don't deserve this.
I deserve to be treated superior,
Like a human being.

I get stuck with a lot of pain,
My worry increases, as does the day
I love the thought of new images in my head,
But not of guilt and anguish.

That makes days worse,
i like the intriguing feeling,
That people trounce,
When happy thoughts race through their heads.

Copyright © hawaii06 ... [ 2004-01-23 17:55:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pain and Anguish (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:53:47 PM AEST
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what an amazing poem so sad to not get any comments so baring of the soul and full of the emotion that mades us who we are
brilliant in every sense of the word

Luke

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