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Array ( [sid] => 32514 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pains path of life [time] => 2004-01-23 17:27:20 [hometext] => These are my thoughts on the path of life, and the pain involved in it. Hope you all like it. [bodytext] => ----------___________------------

b>You know they got me trapped in this prison of seclusion
Happiness, living this life sometimes is a delusion
Live my life in a secluded mental prison cell
I'd rather die than be trapped in a living hell
I have got to find a way to survive
Cause they win when your soul dies

I see this place in my minds eye where we all can last,
No one worried about the future, or troubled by their past.
You probably panic, stranded in search of a better planet
Realism hard to understand, we stand slanted
and still stranded, merciless thieves stole the best of me
I pray to Jesus to please take the rest of me

People lose there child hood to guns
Nobody cries no more; cause we all die for fun
So why you ask me if I want peace, if you can't grant it
There is so much fighting across the whole planet
So we can never be peace, the pain will never cease.

Faced with the demons, addicted to hearing victims screaming
Guess some were evil since birth, product of cursed semen’s
Cause even our birthdays, are cursed days
Born to die, Dying to survive in the worst ways.
Every once in awhile, I reminisce
And wonder how life ever came to this.

Still I, can't breathe, something’s evil in my screams
Cause every time I breathe, I think they are killing me
I'm having nightmares, homicidal fantasies
I wake up strangling my bed sheets
Somebody help me, tell me where to go from here
Cause even I cry, but does the Lord care?

This is what I scream as I dream in a paranoid state
And is my fate a lifetime of hate?
No more hesitation each and every person crazed
And they wonder why we suicidal running around dazed
Show us a place, a path to go,
Let this pain of life disappear slow
No more fighting no more fears,
Life has to be better then these anguished tears.

Beat the pain to the ground,
Hurt the hate and knock it down,
The path of least resistance,
That is what we must take for a better existence.


Please check out my other poems. Thank you for taking the time to read this..

MajesticPoet
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Pains path of life

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:27:20 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



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b>You know they got me trapped in this prison of seclusion
Happiness, living this life sometimes is a delusion
Live my life in a secluded mental prison cell
I'd rather die than be trapped in a living hell
I have got to find a way to survive
Cause they win when your soul dies

I see this place in my minds eye where we all can last,
No one worried about the future, or troubled by their past.
You probably panic, stranded in search of a better planet
Realism hard to understand, we stand slanted
and still stranded, merciless thieves stole the best of me
I pray to Jesus to please take the rest of me

People lose there child hood to guns
Nobody cries no more; cause we all die for fun
So why you ask me if I want peace, if you can't grant it
There is so much fighting across the whole planet
So we can never be peace, the pain will never cease.

Faced with the demons, addicted to hearing victims screaming
Guess some were evil since birth, product of cursed semen’s
Cause even our birthdays, are cursed days
Born to die, Dying to survive in the worst ways.
Every once in awhile, I reminisce
And wonder how life ever came to this.

Still I, can't breathe, something’s evil in my screams
Cause every time I breathe, I think they are killing me
I'm having nightmares, homicidal fantasies
I wake up strangling my bed sheets
Somebody help me, tell me where to go from here
Cause even I cry, but does the Lord care?

This is what I scream as I dream in a paranoid state
And is my fate a lifetime of hate?
No more hesitation each and every person crazed
And they wonder why we suicidal running around dazed
Show us a place, a path to go,
Let this pain of life disappear slow
No more fighting no more fears,
Life has to be better then these anguished tears.

Beat the pain to the ground,
Hurt the hate and knock it down,
The path of least resistance,
That is what we must take for a better existence.


Please check out my other poems. Thank you for taking the time to read this..

MajesticPoet




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Re: Pains path of life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:41:38 AM AEST
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incredible!!
michelle


Re: Pains path of life (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:43:19 AM AEST
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Oh My MajesticPoet......you are just that....Majestic like a tall mountain Peak...I really enjoyed reading your masterpiece. I have to agree with you wholeheartedly, but the only that will always stay glued in my memory will the one about "dying for fun"
What a marvelous way of putting it! For yes, it seems that dying is fun today...alot better than the way life is! But don't give up hope..tomorrow will look better I know
This was a wonderfully written poem!
consue




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