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[title] => YPDC my first year.
[time] => 2004-01-23 04:02:35
[hometext] => New members warning. The last three lines should be taken with a pinch of salt.
[bodytext] => I found this site twelve months ago
so this is my "first birthday".
A suitable occasion
to have a little mirth day?
First to Mick, BIG THANK YOU for
corrections begged and made
I think I asked for sixty two
(a donation has been paid)
Next to all the ladies
a great big THANK YOU too
Angel, Dawny, emy,
Val and Connie Sue
Nessa, Jenni,, Shari,
Dixie,Jan, Michele,
Wendy,Judy,merry,
Saira and Michelle.
Anne, Phillipa, .Kara,
Becca, Lynn and Kie,
I can't remember everyone
no matter how I try
Such company extends the heart
with love in joyous style
we fantasise or tease......
to raise a little smile.
But menfolk!.......like to challenge
with differing points of view
yet not without a graciouness
that yields a point or two..........
........or offer some unstinting praise
like manna heaven sent
and even write a little verse
like norm .....(a pleasant gent)
And all the honest poetry
that everybody writes.
the smiles, the frowns, the heartaches.....
.....Crowded days and lonely nights.
Some are so sad I've even had
a tear roll down my face
I hope that heaven's half as good
as this enchanted place.
YPDC.....Micks Miracle!
(It's said he's due a Knighthood!
D'you know he's writing poetry
some say is really quiet good)*
bob
* Please heed the warning in authors notes.
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YPDC my first year.
Contributed by
wrybod
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Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:02:35 AM in AEST
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I found this site twelve months ago
so this is my "first birthday".
A suitable occasion
to have a little mirth day?
First to Mick, BIG THANK YOU for
corrections begged and made
I think I asked for sixty two
(a donation has been paid)
Next to all the ladies
a great big THANK YOU too
Angel, Dawny, emy,
Val and Connie Sue
Nessa, Jenni,, Shari,
Dixie,Jan, Michele,
Wendy,Judy,merry,
Saira and Michelle.
Anne, Phillipa, .Kara,
Becca, Lynn and Kie,
I can't remember everyone
no matter how I try
Such company extends the heart
with love in joyous style
we fantasise or tease......
to raise a little smile.
But menfolk!.......like to challenge
with differing points of view
yet not without a graciouness
that yields a point or two..........
........or offer some unstinting praise
like manna heaven sent
and even write a little verse
like norm .....(a pleasant gent)
And all the honest poetry
that everybody writes.
the smiles, the frowns, the heartaches.....
.....Crowded days and lonely nights.
Some are so sad I've even had
a tear roll down my face
I hope that heaven's half as good
as this enchanted place.
YPDC.....Micks Miracle!
(It's said he's due a Knighthood!
D'you know he's writing poetry
some say is really quiet good)*
bob
* Please heed the warning in authors notes.
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 07:14:47 AM AEST
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Congrats, Bob..... and thanks.....it's great having you here..... I'm appraoching my 4th year...:>
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by limpingunicorn on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 07:32:15 AM AEST
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Wrybod, you;re not "normal",
You'd rather laugh than cry,
You never want to cut yourself,
You'd rather live than die,
Life for you's amusing,
A wondrous, crazy thing,
So, as it is your "birthday",
You've been appointed King!
Bob |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:42:00 AM AEST
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| excellent sweet write, youve captured the ypdc essence, so happy you are here, you brighten up my world:) hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 11:53:31 AM AEST
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Congrats & happy first.
Your poems always make me smile.
I remember the first poem I read
of yours about fishing. I was hooked!
I grew up with a fisherman and
I have a soft spot for them....
They are often misunderstood-
Great Poem!
Kie |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 01:45:45 PM AEST
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Happy birthday Bob!! I will be approaching my first year next month.This is a sweet tribute to ypdc as well as for all the rest of us many thanks! I enjoy your work and your friendship!
michelle |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:13:47 AM AEST
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dear bob,
I just completely missed your first birthday.
I'm so sorry...i think I completely missed this poem.
I haven't been here but about 6 months now....but the place will never be the same again....yipeeeeeeeee, I too salute you King of the UK.......i'll never forget your poem on the geese as they fly over your way. And of course al the many laughs you bring to each of here at YPDC....reading your poems is like celebrating our birthdays many times in a year!
consuemate
happy again! |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 07:10:35 AM AEST
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Happy Birthday Bob!! I love reading your poems, some make me laugh and some make me think, but they are all brilliant. I hope you are here for many years to come
Love Dawny x |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 08:15:20 PM AEST
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| Bob, can't believe its been a year already, but a great one with you, your always have a wonderful way of picking up the lonely hearted, and making all of us smiles, you've probably learned alot in this past year, take care Val and Nathan |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
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| Very well written! I praise thee. |
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Re: YPDC my first year.
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 07:55:21 AM AEST
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I'm still working on my first... Yet I've found that you're a great poet. Though I disagree with you theologically, I admire your talent. Keep it coming.
Take care.
David |
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