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Array ( [sid] => 32426 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unwanted [time] => 2004-01-22 18:55:15 [hometext] => i feel like this alot hope you all can relate [bodytext] => My thoughts are of suicide
My mind it is haunted
Of my past and my pain
How I am the one unwanted

My thoughts are darkened
As I bleed for all I can not take
I’ve been the one unwanted
And my life it was a mistake

My thoughts become sadden
By the tears I have caused
To be wanted was my fight
One that has now ended

And even now I have no place to go
By my pain I am still haunted
And even here in hell
I am unwanted [comments] => 3 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 36 [informant] => misstressdistrubed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Unwanted

Contributed by misstressdistrubed on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



My thoughts are of suicide
My mind it is haunted
Of my past and my pain
How I am the one unwanted

My thoughts are darkened
As I bleed for all I can not take
I’ve been the one unwanted
And my life it was a mistake

My thoughts become sadden
By the tears I have caused
To be wanted was my fight
One that has now ended

And even now I have no place to go
By my pain I am still haunted
And even here in hell
I am unwanted




Copyright © misstressdistrubed ... [ 2004-01-22 18:55:15]
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Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:25:32 PM AEST
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i so know what it feels like. u write so well, i hope u keep writing. hope to see more from ya.


Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by SkYYBLu on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 08:04:08 PM AEST
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Wow, you put this so well...I can relate. Great write! Keep it up! :)

~Paige


Re: Unwanted (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 11:11:37 AM AEST
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Woo...high emotions here...it is terrible to feel unwanted...I cannot really relate...for my particular fiasco is not fitting in wherever I go..always the odd duck. But I guess its the same in some cases...that terrible feeling of rejection wherever you go and whatever you do...I can at least feel some of that pain.




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