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Array ( [sid] => 32314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confessionn [time] => 2004-01-21 17:12:19 [hometext] => This poem reflects my confused emotions about a guy that I like [bodytext] => I know it's okay, as long as you’re happy
That’s all that seems to matter to me these days
I’ll hide among the breathing silhouettes
That I wish were valueless to you
A worthless feeling destroys me every single time
Would you award me for giving up for you?
To hold a pillow close
As I allow a few distressful tears sink into the sheets
You seem so far away sometimes
It's okay to watch me suffer
You’re worth every hint of pain that pierces me
I’ll breathe one last sight of you
And endure my eyes crumbling at your feet
Please choose to pull away from me
So maybe I can focus on what should matter
Possibly even receive a minute afar from the night’s eyes
The silence no longer tires me
But only gives me comfort for my strained vitality
That I had only ruined just to keep you forever
To bleed out your words I’ve kept for too long
To no longer covet such beauty that I cannot grasp
And ache and grieve for eternity’s song [comments] => 4 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 33 [informant] => SpreadYourWings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Confessionn

Contributed by SpreadYourWings on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I know it's okay, as long as you’re happy
That’s all that seems to matter to me these days
I’ll hide among the breathing silhouettes
That I wish were valueless to you
A worthless feeling destroys me every single time
Would you award me for giving up for you?
To hold a pillow close
As I allow a few distressful tears sink into the sheets
You seem so far away sometimes
It's okay to watch me suffer
You’re worth every hint of pain that pierces me
I’ll breathe one last sight of you
And endure my eyes crumbling at your feet
Please choose to pull away from me
So maybe I can focus on what should matter
Possibly even receive a minute afar from the night’s eyes
The silence no longer tires me
But only gives me comfort for my strained vitality
That I had only ruined just to keep you forever
To bleed out your words I’ve kept for too long
To no longer covet such beauty that I cannot grasp
And ache and grieve for eternity’s song

Copyright Â© SpreadYourWings ... [ 2004-01-21 17:12:19]
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Re: Confessionn (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:11:16 PM AEST
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Spread,this was a beautiful write,I enjoyed it from beginning to end.Thanks for the lovely read,I think we can all relate some time or the other....*sigh*
PumpkinPie

Re: Confessionn (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:29:36 AM AEST
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Hope it works out. I hope youe heart's in good hands.
Take care.
David

Re: Confessionn (User Rating: 1 )
by Lolita on Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:15:10 PM AEST
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Wow... just wow. I can relate. Great poem.

Re: Confessionn (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:16:54 AM AEST
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yep I can relate to this except more with girls not guys. I loved this its not simple, but instead well written and to the point.

"You’re worth every hint of pain that pierces me"

Bobo (Joel)

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