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[title] => The Truth
[time] => 2004-01-21 03:19:51
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[bodytext] => This is just a little bit of information I thought I might share Just in case it ever crossed your mind that I might actually care There was a time I would have given up everything just to be with you I thought you were the perfect man too good to be true I even wrote a list of every reason you touched my heart Unfortunately, reality hit and tore all my fantacies apart I gave myself to you, despite being with another man I had it all worked out, it was all part of the plan I chose to deceive for one passionate night in your bed But you see, it was more than that to me, it was eternity in my head I thought there was a chance you might actually fall for me You would reach out for me in the middle of the night and realize it was meant to beThen one day I woke up and finally saw the light You chose to betray your best friend for only one night, but you know I am the one to blame I was playing with fire and got burned by its flame I learned a valuable lesson from my broken heart I put all the pieces back together and made a fresh clean start Suddenly you popped up again one day and I gave in I thought maybe we could start all over again but eventually you showed me it was still just a game You only want me when your standing alone in the rain You think you are so cool and you can have it all That's why I'll be laughing the day you fall Do you think I don't understand what's going on Well, I do and I choose to play along I may write sappy words of loves and fears My mind controls my emotions though and I won't give into tears I'm using you the same way you are using me and whenever I'm through with you I'll spit you out and set you free
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The Truth
Contributed by
sweetpeall
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:19:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This is just a little bit of information I thought I might share Just in case it ever crossed your mind that I might actually care There was a time I would have given up everything just to be with you I thought you were the perfect man too good to be true I even wrote a list of every reason you touched my heart Unfortunately, reality hit and tore all my fantacies apart I gave myself to you, despite being with another man I had it all worked out, it was all part of the plan I chose to deceive for one passionate night in your bed But you see, it was more than that to me, it was eternity in my head I thought there was a chance you might actually fall for me You would reach out for me in the middle of the night and realize it was meant to beThen one day I woke up and finally saw the light You chose to betray your best friend for only one night, but you know I am the one to blame I was playing with fire and got burned by its flame I learned a valuable lesson from my broken heart I put all the pieces back together and made a fresh clean start Suddenly you popped up again one day and I gave in I thought maybe we could start all over again but eventually you showed me it was still just a game You only want me when your standing alone in the rain You think you are so cool and you can have it all That's why I'll be laughing the day you fall Do you think I don't understand what's going on Well, I do and I choose to play along I may write sappy words of loves and fears My mind controls my emotions though and I won't give into tears I'm using you the same way you are using me and whenever I'm through with you I'll spit you out and set you free
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Re: The Truth
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:34:20 AM AEST
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| we all have been burned... do unto others and all that... |
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Re: The Truth
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:54:47 AM AEST
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Very good work.
Hope things turn out for the best.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Truth
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:12:17 AM AEST
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| Very well written but i think you dont need to take reveng because the biggest way of hurting him would be just to tell him to ***** off and you dont nedd him...i sence alot of hurt in your poem i hope your wounds heal....and you find the right person somone obviously who isnt a player |
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Re: The Truth
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by jme on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:17:07 AM AEST
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| Your story was expressed well. |
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