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Living in a one shot Paris, circular vison appears square on the well's neck and back, but I'm not sure, just a miserable old *******

1st of June the ice chills my thighs, treasonic patriots are boxing in their dashing reds and blue skies, the ground is balding, receding grass line

Whiskey jokes echoing from the A.M., there's chili on the counter, prom queen's sore from the act, an american fantasy less than it would seem

Capri's half-off, from Parguay, stubley legs shine from the dusty ball fields, sex-packs and screaming hot-dogs sizzle on your canadian *****, shoot the tail on a honkey

21 Revolver digging my garden

Death is such a buzz kill, you can play that two ways, like an abadoned street, t-ball with your feet, an american fantasy less than it would seem

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21 Revolver digging my garden

Contributed by snow24 on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

21 Revolver digging my garden

Living in a one shot Paris, circular vison appears square on the well's neck and back, but I'm not sure, just a miserable old *******

1st of June the ice chills my thighs, treasonic patriots are boxing in their dashing reds and blue skies, the ground is balding, receding grass line

Whiskey jokes echoing from the A.M., there's chili on the counter, prom queen's sore from the act, an american fantasy less than it would seem

Capri's half-off, from Parguay, stubley legs shine from the dusty ball fields, sex-packs and screaming hot-dogs sizzle on your canadian *****, shoot the tail on a honkey

21 Revolver digging my garden

Death is such a buzz kill, you can play that two ways, like an abadoned street, t-ball with your feet, an american fantasy less than it would seem

21 Revolver digging my garden

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Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden (User Rating: 1 )
by spiffyphil on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:38:23 AM AEST
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This poem - in its darkness (as I see it) is sincere and brilliant. Great job snow, I like this style VERY much, keep it up and it will grow.

Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Khosrow on Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:41:23 PM AEST
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Interesting. I like the enviroment setting for the poem, brings it out really well.

Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:45:58 PM AEST
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Interesting... It was cool.

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