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Array ( [sid] => 32241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stolen innocence [time] => 2004-01-20 19:03:20 [hometext] => I dont actually have a daughter but i always have thoughts of this happening to my own child when im a daddy, i dont know what i would do so here, please please do comment [bodytext] => A broken whisper
In time untold
A silent thought
In hearts so bold

Troubled thoughts
Shattered dreams
Stolen innocence
Raging screams

A daughter lost
My crying shame
Im her daddy
So im to blame

I could not protect
My princess true
Im sorry baby
Please I love you

Ill find the man
His soul ill steal
Ill hurt him so
To kill i will

Behind bars now baby
They sentenced me
But im just happy
..I set you free

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Stolen innocence

Contributed by forever_lonely on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:03:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A broken whisper
In time untold
A silent thought
In hearts so bold

Troubled thoughts
Shattered dreams
Stolen innocence
Raging screams

A daughter lost
My crying shame
Im her daddy
So im to blame

I could not protect
My princess true
Im sorry baby
Please I love you

Ill find the man
His soul ill steal
Ill hurt him so
To kill i will

Behind bars now baby
They sentenced me
But im just happy
..I set you free

Copyright © forever_lonely ... [ 2004-01-20 19:03:20]
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Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by JenimaeMalinaHaloisi on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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That was sweet, you might not want to kill though. But nice thought.

Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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really nice poem dude, shows ur sensitive side and how soft u really are! lol.i would do exactly the same if i had a daughter an same happened, god the guy would wish he never been born if i got hold of him.

keep on fighting
never stop writing

john luv ya dude! HUGS!!!! haha

Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:32:23 PM AEST
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As I already told you i love this poem. One of my fav's it has such much deep raw emotion. I think it prob really is how a father may react. love ur work always. T x

Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:48:23 AM AEST
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Geez what a poem! Its really good! Clear messege and good flow. the ending is really great!
Behind bars now baby
They sentenced me
But im just happy
..I set you free
...........Amazing. Keep it up!!
Anne :n)

Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Big_Hugs on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:43:50 AM AEST
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this is really nice. to me it isn't mean nor does it make you feel that way, despite the killing part, but then if you are hurt in a way that makes you feel as if it is your fault, then i guess that is what you would feel like doing.

despite what you might think i do like this poem. i'm sorry for making you think that i didn't.
love forever
Katharine

Re: Stolen innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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I totally second that. I'd kill the person. Damn good write. Very heartfelt. I really liked this one.

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