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Array ( [sid] => 32233 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Portrait of Pain [time] => 2004-01-20 17:52:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Ill take a knife and press it to your wrist,
Ill dip my paintbrush in your scarlet bliss,
Stand before you with triumph in my eyes
and paint you beautiful, as u slowly lose ur life..

Ill cover up every sin and every scar,
Repaint your memories of past and present wars,
Hide all faces that were smotherd in deceit,
Ill paint you as a whole until every end meets...

And when every brushstroke is done with its journey
And you can no longer take a breath
Ill step away and put down my paintbrush,
pick up my knife,
... and paint myself beautiful [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => deadly_blaZe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Portrait of Pain

Contributed by deadly_blaZe on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Ill take a knife and press it to your wrist,
Ill dip my paintbrush in your scarlet bliss,
Stand before you with triumph in my eyes
and paint you beautiful, as u slowly lose ur life..

Ill cover up every sin and every scar,
Repaint your memories of past and present wars,
Hide all faces that were smotherd in deceit,
Ill paint you as a whole until every end meets...

And when every brushstroke is done with its journey
And you can no longer take a breath
Ill step away and put down my paintbrush,
pick up my knife,
... and paint myself beautiful

Copyright © deadly_blaZe ... [ 2004-01-20 17:52:22]
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Re: Portrait of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:55:09 PM AEST
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This is a very sad poem...but it is very good...

Re: Portrait of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST
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***** skittles. that was incredible. very graphic and a nice story as well.

"pick up my knife,
... and paint myself beautiful"

those two lines were the best. great scrawl.

51

Re: Portrait of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing very strongly worded... I could almost feel the strength of your depression which spawned this. This was beautiful. I loved it.

Bobo (Joel)

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