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oh so high.
It felt as if
I could really fly.

You told me things
I wanted to hear.
To my very heart,
you became so near.

I thought it came from the heart,
Everything you said.
But how is that possible,
When your heart is so dead?

Because you let me fall
from the clouds so high.
I fell until
I thought I would die.

And close I came.
For I had begun to depend.
For anything, everything
To no end.

But the end did come.
I found you out.
And it broke my heart
with a single clout.

So heal I did
Till I was well.
Now I've come
here to tell.

To tell you just
How bad it hurt.
But now I stand
Whole and unhurt.

And one thing is left
That I've to say.
You'll get yours!
Somewhere someday! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Betrayal

Contributed by Elf on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You built me up
oh so high.
It felt as if
I could really fly.

You told me things
I wanted to hear.
To my very heart,
you became so near.

I thought it came from the heart,
Everything you said.
But how is that possible,
When your heart is so dead?

Because you let me fall
from the clouds so high.
I fell until
I thought I would die.

And close I came.
For I had begun to depend.
For anything, everything
To no end.

But the end did come.
I found you out.
And it broke my heart
with a single clout.

So heal I did
Till I was well.
Now I've come
here to tell.

To tell you just
How bad it hurt.
But now I stand
Whole and unhurt.

And one thing is left
That I've to say.
You'll get yours!
Somewhere someday!

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-01-20 17:04:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:55:52 PM AEST
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Your poem is well written
--------------------------------
I like the fact you recovered well,
and to this person you did tell
to get lost and they'll get theirs
you didn't cry, but dispelled your cares

Re: The Betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:31:29 PM AEST
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Wow this was incredibly brilliant and well written. I could totally relate. I really really liked this.
'Because you let me fall
from the clouds so high.
I fell until
I thought I would die.'
That was incredible.

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