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Array ( [sid] => 32190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My angel of death [time] => 2004-01-20 07:56:42 [hometext] => Sometimes love is stronger than life [bodytext] => I thought I knew you,
I did not
Told you I love you,
You just smiled,

I felt your hand,
Just touch on mine
..You never answered me my angel..
I thought as I looked inside your eyes

I saw you hiding your surprise
I spoke.. angel, Think it through
...My god, I care so much for you...

The days passed by, but no reply
I'm thinking back to what I said
..You never answered me my angel..
The words kept running through my head

A few more days.. A few more nights,
It feels like years passing by,
And then like thunder from the sky
Your call, your call, I feel relieved,
Just for second, then I answer.

Your voice seems sad, you softly greet me,
The words keep running in my head
..You never answered me my angel..
I greet you back.

A silent moment, then you speak..
You seem confused, you sound lost,
Your words break up, you stutter, your breath so heavy,
Shhh, "don't speak" I said, I know what you'll say already.

A quite moment and then

You softly say three words "I'm sorry"
These words just echoed in my mind,
And I kept thinking - this can't be true
...My god, I care so much for you...

Then you hanged up,
I sat and stared up at the ceiling,
This can't be true, it can't
My life now has no meaning.

I felt my heart stop beating
The voice inside me kept repeating
"I'm sorry", "I'm sorry", my vision blurred,
My arms collapsed, I dropped the phone from my hand
I closed my eyes, I saw my life
I saw your face just one last time
I heard your words - repeat, repeat
They fell in place of my heartbeat

And as I took in my last breath,
the words came out:
You're my angel..
My angel of death... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => subnet_spider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
My angel of death

Contributed by subnet_spider on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:56:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I thought I knew you,
I did not
Told you I love you,
You just smiled,

I felt your hand,
Just touch on mine
..You never answered me my angel..
I thought as I looked inside your eyes

I saw you hiding your surprise
I spoke.. angel, Think it through
...My god, I care so much for you...

The days passed by, but no reply
I'm thinking back to what I said
..You never answered me my angel..
The words kept running through my head

A few more days.. A few more nights,
It feels like years passing by,
And then like thunder from the sky
Your call, your call, I feel relieved,
Just for second, then I answer.

Your voice seems sad, you softly greet me,
The words keep running in my head
..You never answered me my angel..
I greet you back.

A silent moment, then you speak..
You seem confused, you sound lost,
Your words break up, you stutter, your breath so heavy,
Shhh, "don't speak" I said, I know what you'll say already.

A quite moment and then

You softly say three words "I'm sorry"
These words just echoed in my mind,
And I kept thinking - this can't be true
...My god, I care so much for you...

Then you hanged up,
I sat and stared up at the ceiling,
This can't be true, it can't
My life now has no meaning.

I felt my heart stop beating
The voice inside me kept repeating
"I'm sorry", "I'm sorry", my vision blurred,
My arms collapsed, I dropped the phone from my hand
I closed my eyes, I saw my life
I saw your face just one last time
I heard your words - repeat, repeat
They fell in place of my heartbeat

And as I took in my last breath,
the words came out:
You're my angel..
My angel of death...




Copyright © subnet_spider ... [ 2004-01-20 07:56:42]
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Re: My angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 02:45:21 PM AEST
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Interesting... Good write though. Very sad.


Re: My angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:34:14 AM AEST
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very sad. i really liked it alot, you have alot of talent.

Arden




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