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A pain that will not cease
Save me

Drain me of all my feelings
Make the darkness fade
Save me

No arms to feel around me
No warmth to sooth my weary body
No love
Save me

Tell me what to do
Save me from this hell
Please
Don't ignore my screams
Save me

The whole world oblivious
To every tear
Every cut
Save me

How much longer must I suffer
Just tell me when will it stop
Save me

Give me peace of mind
Relief from lonely nights
Crying myself to sleep
Save me

Heart-felt words, loving glances
Without them I am lost
Broken hearts, agony
I feel no more
Save me

Just lay beside me
Tell me everythings ok
Make me feel loved
Save me

My heart forever broken
Eternal suffering
Damned..
Forgotten..
Bleeding..

I need to be saved.. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 13 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Save Me

Contributed by night_child on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A pain I feel
A pain that will not cease
Save me

Drain me of all my feelings
Make the darkness fade
Save me

No arms to feel around me
No warmth to sooth my weary body
No love
Save me

Tell me what to do
Save me from this hell
Please
Don't ignore my screams
Save me

The whole world oblivious
To every tear
Every cut
Save me

How much longer must I suffer
Just tell me when will it stop
Save me

Give me peace of mind
Relief from lonely nights
Crying myself to sleep
Save me

Heart-felt words, loving glances
Without them I am lost
Broken hearts, agony
I feel no more
Save me

Just lay beside me
Tell me everythings ok
Make me feel loved
Save me

My heart forever broken
Eternal suffering
Damned..
Forgotten..
Bleeding..

I need to be saved..

Copyright © night_child ... [ 2004-01-19 21:41:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST
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I pray that the pain will end soon and that those loving arms u long for will be wraped around u tightly!!

God was always there, and still is, to wipe away my tears!! Let Him do the same for u!!

Very good poem!!

MissTea

Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:14:32 AM AEST
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dont you hat ie when people want to bring god into everything... your other comments aside... i like this piece.... for your pain to lessen, it must be shared...

Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:30:32 AM AEST
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wow this is a beatiful piece... its very emotionally felt.. I have felt the same way.. like when your heart is so broken that you want to feel nothing at all ... wonderful write and i hope you feel better

Peace

JENNA

Re: Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:35:46 AM AEST
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Wow that was great. There are times I could relate to the whole thing and most of the time I can relate to most of it. Very well done. I really like the wording.

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