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Array ( [sid] => 32159 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love or Hate [time] => 2004-01-19 20:15:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i want to wrap my hands around your throat
to watch you choke to your death
this is what i want to see
because of what you did to me
i thought me and you were meant to be
but i was just unrealistic and childish
i thought you were wonderful
but now i see the true guy you are
and that guy with me is not suposed to be
why do i care so much
when i can't stand you being near
what is this feeling
that i'm having that isn't leaving
is it love
or is it hate
you can't love without hate
and can't hate without love
i'm so confused
i'm not sure if i love or hate you
i guess it doesn't matter
the things between us are over
but i'm still not sure
what to be feeling about you
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Pyrochick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Love or Hate

Contributed by Pyrochick on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:15:57 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



i want to wrap my hands around your throat
to watch you choke to your death
this is what i want to see
because of what you did to me
i thought me and you were meant to be
but i was just unrealistic and childish
i thought you were wonderful
but now i see the true guy you are
and that guy with me is not suposed to be
why do i care so much
when i can't stand you being near
what is this feeling
that i'm having that isn't leaving
is it love
or is it hate
you can't love without hate
and can't hate without love
i'm so confused
i'm not sure if i love or hate you
i guess it doesn't matter
the things between us are over
but i'm still not sure
what to be feeling about you




Copyright © Pyrochick ... [ 2004-01-19 20:15:57]
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Re: Love or Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 08:20:42 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...i hope it helped you vent. Good luck in the future.


Re: Love or Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:05:46 PM AEST
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You got emotion written all over that poem. Great analogies too "you can't love without hate and can't hate without love" Well done the rhyme scheme not sure there is one probably a block verse? Would have like to here it rhyme in some off beat way anger tends to rhyme or repeat. Words get thrown together and spewed. You got the power you go girl.


Re: Love or Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 12:43:05 AM AEST
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intense and these feeling you speak of are both very powerful. Love and hate. Or love to hate eachother such a complicated life at times. This is a great poem.
michelle


Re: Love or Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 02:21:20 AM AEST
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whatever we have with one person eventually breaks down... truly time is the cure...


Re: Love or Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:28:27 AM AEST
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Wow this really spoke of confused and mixed emotions. I thinik you wrote it very well. Using just the right feelings. Nice. I've been there before. Time doesn't seem to help.




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