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Array ( [sid] => 32143 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HER(sonnet 1) [time] => 2004-01-19 18:13:21 [hometext] => hey its my first time writing and it was for englishbut i liked writing and wanted to see wat u thought [bodytext] => When I see her I cannot stand to breathe
Its like my heart has stopped when she’s not here
When she comes in the room I have to leave
If she cant be with me at least be near

When I think about her I shed a tear
Life feels like I am ripping out my eyes
To live without her I can only fear
If I said I don’t care it is all lies

Telling me to let her go would be wise
Being without her will drive me to kill
Though you don’t show it I can hear your cries
I have realized you are just a thrill

For this is my story and this is my ill
To rid me of this I would need a pill
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ckyhim666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

HER(sonnet 1)

Contributed by ckyhim666 on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When I see her I cannot stand to breathe
Its like my heart has stopped when she’s not here
When she comes in the room I have to leave
If she cant be with me at least be near

When I think about her I shed a tear
Life feels like I am ripping out my eyes
To live without her I can only fear
If I said I don’t care it is all lies

Telling me to let her go would be wise
Being without her will drive me to kill
Though you don’t show it I can hear your cries
I have realized you are just a thrill

For this is my story and this is my ill
To rid me of this I would need a pill

Copyright Â© ckyhim666 ... [ 2004-01-19 18:13:21]
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Re: HER(sonnet 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:19:14 PM AEST
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Welcome, good job I liked it, people don't comment too often on new writers, it takes a while. I have been here a bit and still don't get many comments.

Re: HER(sonnet 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:21:00 PM AEST
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Allow me to welcome you to
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This is an excellent sonnet..I enjoyed reading it very much. Hope to see more here...
Jenni

Re: HER(sonnet 1) (User Rating: 1 )
by raypower on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:40:43 PM AEST
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This poem is a good poem which suits a lament for desired friendship and broken relation

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