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Array ( [sid] => 32065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK [time] => 2004-01-18 23:18:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Thank you to all of you who have caused me pain
Caused me grief
You have given me the ability to cry
Without tears left to shead
The pain has been my paper
And the bloodied tears my ink
You have given me the gift of depression
And the pleasure of self-mutilation
I will not forget any of you in my dark days
Your names will be written in blood
Stained in this very book
Thank You
For condeming yourselves
To the same torture you have shown me
Through the years
So when the lights go out
You shall recieve my thanks
After you read the pain on the paper
Written in bloodied ink
You shall realize you made a mistake
Thank you for that satisfaction
From the depths of my darkened soul
And my broken heart
Thank You
(More To Come...This is not the end...only the beginning) [comments] => 5 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kittie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK

Contributed by Kittie on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 11:18:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Thank you to all of you who have caused me pain
Caused me grief
You have given me the ability to cry
Without tears left to shead
The pain has been my paper
And the bloodied tears my ink
You have given me the gift of depression
And the pleasure of self-mutilation
I will not forget any of you in my dark days
Your names will be written in blood
Stained in this very book
Thank You
For condeming yourselves
To the same torture you have shown me
Through the years
So when the lights go out
You shall recieve my thanks
After you read the pain on the paper
Written in bloodied ink
You shall realize you made a mistake
Thank you for that satisfaction
From the depths of my darkened soul
And my broken heart
Thank You
(More To Come...This is not the end...only the beginning)

Copyright © Kittie ... [ 2004-01-18 23:18:20]
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Re: PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK (User Rating: 1 )
by netweight23oz on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:30:41 AM AEST
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this has really good imagery like the bloodied tears my ink.... its really good

Re: PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:26:21 AM AEST
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im loving this...

Re: PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:53:04 AM AEST
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Yep, that's about as dark as one can get. Vivid write, I could see the blood flowing.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:55:14 AM AEST
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ouch.. this is painful..
afraid_of_fear x_x_x

Re: PAIN PAPER AND BLOODIED INK (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:38:56 PM AEST
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Not a very nice little kittie are ya? This was a chilling write. Very dark and angry. Nice.

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