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With only the dark for a friend beside me
I fear for I know not where i am
I fear for I know not whats inside me
I close my eyes and hope for light
Something or someone so I know its alright
No where to escape to, no way to see
If only he'd come rescue me
For I'm lost in place, a place of misery
Being empounded by a voice
It's taking me over, controlling my mind
Swallowing me whole, out of this world
It's taken me now, he was to late
For this dark room was my biggest mistake [comments] => 5 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => fallen_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

empounded

Contributed by fallen_eyes on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cowering in the corner of a lonely room
With only the dark for a friend beside me
I fear for I know not where i am
I fear for I know not whats inside me
I close my eyes and hope for light
Something or someone so I know its alright
No where to escape to, no way to see
If only he'd come rescue me
For I'm lost in place, a place of misery
Being empounded by a voice
It's taking me over, controlling my mind
Swallowing me whole, out of this world
It's taken me now, he was to late
For this dark room was my biggest mistake

Copyright © fallen_eyes ... [ 2004-01-18 08:53:25]
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Re: empounded (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:20:41 AM AEST
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wow your poem is oozing with strong emotion i really liked it.....well written

Re: empounded (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 02:08:57 PM AEST
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I really liked the emotion, but hate the too late...and wonder what the dark room is? Shivvering here..

Re: empounded (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:28:42 PM AEST
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hey tam
i really love these poem i just want to find you a give you a big hug, your style is so timeless every time i read a poem by you im lost in pure emotion and find the clock speed past me without even a whisper, i could sit and read your poetry for hours and this is one of those poems

with luv

Luke

Re: empounded (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 06:03:29 AM AEST
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Felt like I was in the opposite corner of that dark room, but couldn't scream. Great poem, and i'm sure a very emotional write for you.

"Cowering in the corner of a lonely room
With only the dark for a friend beside me"

Perfect lines, set the tone for the entire piece very well.

Truly,
-V.S.

Re: empounded (User Rating: 1 )
by Empty_Soul on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 02:40:53 PM AEST
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hmm what luke said, lol, seriously though, another great poem from you! yet even more flowing emotions, i love your poems, they realyl draw me in!

keep on fighting
never stop writing

John xx

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