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Array ( [sid] => 31962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your lies [time] => 2004-01-17 16:26:17 [hometext] => this is really old i just felt like putting it up [bodytext] => Trapped inside this reality of a dream
I find myself surrounded and captivated
By the enigmatic way you roll lies off the tip of your tounge
With beauty and poise you can break my heart
As I wander through my own head
You destroyed my navigation through things you said

All I want Is a happy ending
From all the things I put my self through
Constant Agony and Torture of my soul
Maybe if I rip open my chest
And hand you my heart it will be enough
But probably not

My mind is tricked by disguised lies
As I drink the poison of your sweet words
Venom consumes my body
And all I can taste is the sweet fragrance of death
That surrounds you in a way that’s consistent
To the inconsistent way you make me feel [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => netweight23oz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
your lies

Contributed by netweight23oz on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Trapped inside this reality of a dream
I find myself surrounded and captivated
By the enigmatic way you roll lies off the tip of your tounge
With beauty and poise you can break my heart
As I wander through my own head
You destroyed my navigation through things you said

All I want Is a happy ending
From all the things I put my self through
Constant Agony and Torture of my soul
Maybe if I rip open my chest
And hand you my heart it will be enough
But probably not

My mind is tricked by disguised lies
As I drink the poison of your sweet words
Venom consumes my body
And all I can taste is the sweet fragrance of death
That surrounds you in a way that’s consistent
To the inconsistent way you make me feel




Copyright © netweight23oz ... [ 2004-01-17 16:26:17]
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Re: your lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:34:24 AM AEST
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I dunno why but I liked the style and the way you wrote this. Very nice. Seems like a bad memory.




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