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Array ( [sid] => 31959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mild confession [time] => 2004-01-17 15:50:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i have long been a prisoner in my own deceits
i only had eyes for pleasurous pain
like a poor soul wandering for another
i sparked a greed for all that was seen

i was lost in the shadows
i was tempted by everything
which tediuosly tempts

then i saw you
when you then met my gaze
the harshness of my past
began floating away

i was at last free
yet embraced by your arms
i was at last free
yet enslaved by your charms

i was of course afraid, and thought of you as lust...i tried pushing you away...
thinking you to harm me
just like everybody else

now i am sorry
i ask for forgiveness
i ask for trust
please, never leave me..
alone in the shadow of my own mistakes. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

mild confession

Contributed by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i have long been a prisoner in my own deceits
i only had eyes for pleasurous pain
like a poor soul wandering for another
i sparked a greed for all that was seen

i was lost in the shadows
i was tempted by everything
which tediuosly tempts

then i saw you
when you then met my gaze
the harshness of my past
began floating away

i was at last free
yet embraced by your arms
i was at last free
yet enslaved by your charms

i was of course afraid, and thought of you as lust...i tried pushing you away...
thinking you to harm me
just like everybody else

now i am sorry
i ask for forgiveness
i ask for trust
please, never leave me..
alone in the shadow of my own mistakes.

Copyright © Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre ... [ 2004-01-17 15:50:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: mild confession (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:03:10 PM AEST
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Oh, this told such a sad story..... beautiful and sorrowful..... I wish you two the best together.

Lovely write.

God bless,
Ellen

Re: mild confession (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:53:28 PM AEST
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I really liked this. It was somewhat sad and I just loved it though. It was very well written.

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