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such clarity outlined
by the trace of your kiss
then gone
disappeared
I cannot see me
nobody sees me here
or there or anywhere
blended into the background
without you to sustain me
blush me with life's colors
blooming bright
I disappear
invisible behind tears
falling silver curtain
blocks the light
all color washes away
dripping from your fingertips
red remorse
green jealousy, blue sadness
yellow sunshine and happiness
I turn as pale as moonlight
a shadow of memory

2:41 PM 1/17/2004 gmm

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I Am Invisible

Contributed by Merry on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

my own invisibility defies me
such clarity outlined
by the trace of your kiss
then gone
disappeared
I cannot see me
nobody sees me here
or there or anywhere
blended into the background
without you to sustain me
blush me with life's colors
blooming bright
I disappear
invisible behind tears
falling silver curtain
blocks the light
all color washes away
dripping from your fingertips
red remorse
green jealousy, blue sadness
yellow sunshine and happiness
I turn as pale as moonlight
a shadow of memory

2:41 PM 1/17/2004 gmm

Copyright © Merry ... [ 2004-01-17 15:23:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:34:50 PM AEST
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Oh so sad & bitter! This poem is great! It has such imagery that makes you feel your pain! Great write!

Anne :D

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:38:42 PM AEST
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this is so sad. it makes me feel unhappy. ive felt like this before...its not very nice. this is a great write, i can really tell the feelings put into this. keep up the good work, luv phil xx

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:50:37 PM AEST
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yes i do, ...so real within' the moment then *poof*... your poem is a rush of feelings expressed wonderfully, how often i have felt this way myself, subperb writing as i have come to love in your poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:08:34 PM AEST
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Amazing..... I can totally feel the emotion...... fave line-- "blush me with life's colors". That line just stuck out in my mind. Amazing write Merry =)

God bless,
Ellen

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:33:59 PM AEST
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Your words are so beautiful. The pictures you placed in my mind were heavenly. You write really well. Kie

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:52:44 PM AEST
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Your writing is a thing of poetic perfection Gaille. Some have the magic in their pen, you are one of them. I never tire of reading your writes.

Roses,
Larry

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:59:24 PM AEST
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Wonderful imagery ... simply beautiful ... Jan

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:50:29 PM AEST
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Im at a loss for words this is great!Yes I can relate to this as well.
michelle

Re: I Am Invisible (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:07:17 PM AEST
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I really liked the end of it. How you assigned the colors. I like the whole thing but that part was really cool. I'm not sure if I followed this like I should have. Good write though.

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