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Array ( [sid] => 31954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Name that Drug [time] => 2004-01-17 14:40:08 [hometext] => I think I wrote this when i was high. I found it today, and it looked pretty decent. The fact I cant remember ever writing this, probably means I was either really really drunk, On codine (hehe) or really really stoned... Maybe i'll get a flash back soon [bodytext] => Right now I'm living in extasy,
Lights so bright, music so loud,
Re-living every second of my fantasies,
People move fast not trying to be found,
Lights flicker on and off,
I laugh at everything and everyone,
While I down my bottle of smirnoff,
Dont give a *****, Just wanna have fun,
Escape forever from the reality,
This joint makes me feel alive,
Bringing me closer to insanity,
Smoke so thick I cant survive,
But I dont care, because I can fly,
These drugs make so chilled,
Make me jump and touch the sky,
Its like nothing I ever feeled,
So colorful perfect in every way,
But it wears off so descretly,
Wish that this high could stay,
I hate reality so compeltly,
But I arrive back to the real,
But I'll get that high back for sure,
Spotted some pills that I'll steal,
Back to high and everything pure
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Name that Drug

Contributed by alecfernadez on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:40:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Right now I'm living in extasy,
Lights so bright, music so loud,
Re-living every second of my fantasies,
People move fast not trying to be found,
Lights flicker on and off,
I laugh at everything and everyone,
While I down my bottle of smirnoff,
Dont give a *****, Just wanna have fun,
Escape forever from the reality,
This joint makes me feel alive,
Bringing me closer to insanity,
Smoke so thick I cant survive,
But I dont care, because I can fly,
These drugs make so chilled,
Make me jump and touch the sky,
Its like nothing I ever feeled,
So colorful perfect in every way,
But it wears off so descretly,
Wish that this high could stay,
I hate reality so compeltly,
But I arrive back to the real,
But I'll get that high back for sure,
Spotted some pills that I'll steal,
Back to high and everything pure

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-01-17 14:40:08]
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Re: Name that Drug (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 04:57:12 AM AEST
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nobody commented on this poem because it wasnt about suicide, love or depression... Even if you dont like it, please comment, because so I can see where I'm going wrong.
By the way 27 members on last nite, and this was the best you could do...

Re: Name that Drug (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 07:58:00 AM AEST
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i like this, even if no one else does, it is scary, though, for me to picture such a sene. i've never done drugs or drink and i don't even smoke but i'm sure you not the first and certainly won't be the last to feel this way...
your never alone, so just hang in, in there!

Re: Name that Drug (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:39:34 PM AEST
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i dunno whats up with the hang in there and im sorry stuff.....i just read it....and the fact that im high might effect this a bit....but i thought it was a happy poem....i loved it.....good job....im not really in a state of mind that would alow me to critique it but i think its great

Re: Name that Drug (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:33:10 PM AEST
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Yeah... I just got to it. I've told you I'm way behind man. Lol. I think you must have been on something really good. Lol. I have a feeling you posted it just as you had written it. It's actually not too bad. I think no one wanted to comment on drugs though. Bastards. I think it was pretty good even though you were messed up. It's not your best but it's still good.

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