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Array ( [sid] => 31947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death of Love [time] => 2004-01-17 13:54:06 [hometext] => criticism is much appreciated....thanks for reading... [bodytext] => Hid away, couldn't say
What's been running through my mind
Blown away, can't explain
How you make me feel each time

Hard to believe in what you've never had
And for me I've never had love
Hard to believe in what's made you sad

By the way, couldn't say
How you make me feel each day

My silence is what haunts my days
My silence is what makes me frown
My silence is what makes me dazed
And my silence is what's breaking me down

Hid away, couldn't say
What's been running through my mind
Blown away, can't explain
How you make me feel each time [comments] => 4 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Death of Love

Contributed by stalkee on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Hid away, couldn't say
What's been running through my mind
Blown away, can't explain
How you make me feel each time

Hard to believe in what you've never had
And for me I've never had love
Hard to believe in what's made you sad

By the way, couldn't say
How you make me feel each day

My silence is what haunts my days
My silence is what makes me frown
My silence is what makes me dazed
And my silence is what's breaking me down

Hid away, couldn't say
What's been running through my mind
Blown away, can't explain
How you make me feel each time

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2004-01-17 13:54:06]
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Re: Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:28:00 PM AEST
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wow! this is great! i know you listed it as sad but re-read it, it is a very romantic and beautiful poem, one of your best! love it:) hugs n' nessa

Re: Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 04:12:32 PM AEST
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Just a little suggestion... hope you don't mind....

"By the way, couldn't say
How much you make me feel each day"

that seems a little awkward. if you took that out the poem would flow alot better....

Good write though...

Re: Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:42:21 PM AEST
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Well done :o)
Larry

Re: Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:25:18 AM AEST
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I dunno... I loved this part thoug:
'My silence is what haunts my days
My silence is what makes me frown
My silence is what makes me dazed
And my silence is what's breaking me down'
The chorus type thing isn't too bad. All in all I'd have to say it was a very good write.

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