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Array ( [sid] => 31917 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A comment on a comment [time] => 2004-01-17 02:42:27 [hometext] => Ignorance is truly bliss - god bless. [bodytext] => "Use your skills for something productive"
Said the sheltered person, being disruptive, simply not understanding something.

"Its not right of you to be posting such inappropriate poems!"
The person continued with gripes moans and groans.

"Surely this person must know what is best,
To post what I had written was out of context,
and these poems I admit must very much flex,
ones mind to the limits that I push infact,"
Stunned had this writer replied - with sarcasim that wouldn't subside.

"Show these people a poem YOU have wrote,
one THEY can relate to - and I bet they'll vote,
you are the wrost writer with the wrong idea,
no word in our langauge can make someone feel."
Having made his point to defend his writings - he continued.

"I will write poems about anything I can,
I cant always talk of love or foiled plan,
I wont cry for death - I was never a fan,
but I will tell them stories - as a man."
He had used each word as any other - the way he wanted to - the only plan.

"So show me now what your words must mean,
For I can't feel your written words inside if me,
Not one of your writings had made ME feel,
Yet you assualt my very technique and skill."
The author leans back and shakes his head - he had lost faith in art he had hoped wasn't dead.

"So what does this mean to everyone?
Don't speak your mind or you'll be shun
If you're creative, youd better run
even a religious person - understands none?"
In no way would it change a thing, This author continues despite this fling, and everytime he has a dream, one will hear its vivid insanity. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 50 [informant] => spiffyphil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
A comment on a comment

Contributed by spiffyphil on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:42:27 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



"Use your skills for something productive"
Said the sheltered person, being disruptive, simply not understanding something.

"Its not right of you to be posting such inappropriate poems!"
The person continued with gripes moans and groans.

"Surely this person must know what is best,
To post what I had written was out of context,
and these poems I admit must very much flex,
ones mind to the limits that I push infact,"
Stunned had this writer replied - with sarcasim that wouldn't subside.

"Show these people a poem YOU have wrote,
one THEY can relate to - and I bet they'll vote,
you are the wrost writer with the wrong idea,
no word in our langauge can make someone feel."
Having made his point to defend his writings - he continued.

"I will write poems about anything I can,
I cant always talk of love or foiled plan,
I wont cry for death - I was never a fan,
but I will tell them stories - as a man."
He had used each word as any other - the way he wanted to - the only plan.

"So show me now what your words must mean,
For I can't feel your written words inside if me,
Not one of your writings had made ME feel,
Yet you assualt my very technique and skill."
The author leans back and shakes his head - he had lost faith in art he had hoped wasn't dead.

"So what does this mean to everyone?
Don't speak your mind or you'll be shun
If you're creative, youd better run
even a religious person - understands none?"
In no way would it change a thing, This author continues despite this fling, and everytime he has a dream, one will hear its vivid insanity.




Copyright © spiffyphil ... [ 2004-01-17 02:42:27]
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Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by Mouth on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 02:49:07 AM AEST
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Love it. Great write

sarah


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:02:37 AM AEST
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I read lotssa poems and write many.
I read poems all time that I wouldn't write but if I don't have something good 2 say then I don't say anything at all.
This is a very strong write and if people can't see this then they r blind.
When I freedom of exspression is gone then this planet is in trouble.
A poem is like a tv if u don't like it then change channels. No one on this planet has the right 2 judge u.
Hang tuff. Be free.
peace, joy, hugs, luv, freedom,
emy


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:50:07 AM AEST
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Well done, I don't know the history behind this poem but you def get your point across, somebody has upset you right?

Ali xx


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:03:22 AM AEST
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Great message behind this poem, and well written aswell

Alec Fernandez


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by bychristimsaved on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:03:48 PM AEST
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it is a great poem, even if it is about me...im terribly sorry! i am really not a mean person, and i didnt mean to judge you....so once again im sorry1

jordan


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:45:36 PM AEST
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love it nicely expressed
michelle


Re: A comment on a comment (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:34:07 AM AEST
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This was very well done. Bravo. I still liked the other poem heh heh.




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