Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:03:48 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 31910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Leave [time] => 2004-01-17 01:57:42 [hometext] => it is about the love of your life wanting to leave [bodytext] => I sit here listening to the rain
feeling all this pain
remember the day
I thought you'd never go away
now I wish so hard you would of stayed
but I should have paid attention to you
now I sit here feeling blue
because I have no clue what to do
please don't leave
if you do I'll have no reason to live
all my love to give
just don't leave me here
listening to the rain
feeling all this pain
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sweetpeall [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Don't Leave

Contributed by sweetpeall on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:57:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I sit here listening to the rain
feeling all this pain
remember the day
I thought you'd never go away
now I wish so hard you would of stayed
but I should have paid attention to you
now I sit here feeling blue
because I have no clue what to do
please don't leave
if you do I'll have no reason to live
all my love to give
just don't leave me here
listening to the rain
feeling all this pain

Copyright © sweetpeall ... [ 2004-01-17 01:57:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Don't Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:04:31 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Yes missing someone can hurt so bad. Knowing that they need to leave can hurt so bad, they must be hurting too though. Good write, I know of this frustrating, agonising, painful feeling. To be left behind by someone so dear, who gave you reason to breathe, let them know how you feel. Whatever the reason they want to leave, give it good thought and don't act lightly upon your decisions. Take care and all the best.

Emma.

Re: Don't Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 07:27:23 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Your headed in the right direction with this poem and it has a great intro," sit here listening to the rain." But we want more about the cause and the reaction. What was the day January 16th at 9:00 at Starbucks at the movies? Bring reality into the poem so the reader can become more addcited to the poetry. The words are strong with emotion, all you need is the cause which has it's own emotion. Well done your on you way.

Re: Don't Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:56:35 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

NIce write. I enjoyed it. Seems very heartfelt.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com