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Fully disguised as love I thought could be true

I figured I was ready to care without pain
Though short term happiness is all I gained

What came along I believed was a dream
Mistaken I was, for real it did not seem

Wonderful and amazing however I was blind
The one who was meant for me I still had yet to find

What came along quickly ended with nothing left to give
The walls were closing in on me I felt I could not live

Losing a piece of your heart is a feeling no person should endure
I know this from experience, I have felt this feeling for sure

What came along was God's love and grace
He waited for the right moment working at his own pace

He worked a miracle within me visible for anyone to see
Now that I've surrendered my heart I've never been so free [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 11 [informant] => bychristimsaved [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Surrender

Contributed by bychristimsaved on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:54:05 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

What came along was something completely new
Fully disguised as love I thought could be true

I figured I was ready to care without pain
Though short term happiness is all I gained

What came along I believed was a dream
Mistaken I was, for real it did not seem

Wonderful and amazing however I was blind
The one who was meant for me I still had yet to find

What came along quickly ended with nothing left to give
The walls were closing in on me I felt I could not live

Losing a piece of your heart is a feeling no person should endure
I know this from experience, I have felt this feeling for sure

What came along was God's love and grace
He waited for the right moment working at his own pace

He worked a miracle within me visible for anyone to see
Now that I've surrendered my heart I've never been so free

Copyright © bychristimsaved ... [ 2004-01-17 01:54:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Chester_England_White on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:14:00 AM AEST
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First I would like to thank you for commenting on one of my poems! Oh how sweet the Lord is when we first have His Spirit in our hearts! Praise God He is always on time!
God Bless
Chester

Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:31:00 AM AEST
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Wow this is a masterpeice!
Beautifull!
love and grace can get us on thru.
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy

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