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Array ( [sid] => 319 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy is Gone [time] => 2002-07-13 19:13:21 [hometext] => This is a true story. I'm not that happy about it, but I had to write down my feelings, so I did. [bodytext] =>

Daddy is gone
And he didn't say good bye
He just packed his things and left
He didn't remind me of his love for me
I wonder if he even has it
I wonder if he even had it
All those years he spent with me
All those years I cared
I wonder,
Did it even matter?
Did he even really care?
Did I waste all of that time,
Loving a man who wasn't even my father?
Did I really waste my time,
Just to end up alone and scared?
He has ruined me!
That b**tard!
What did I do to him?!
Was it wrong of me to love a person so much?
Was it wrong of me to hug him everyday?
What the hell did I do?
Am I that bad of a daughter?
I must be
My father left me when I was young
And now my daddy did the same
My daddy is gone
And I'm trying so hard
To move on and keep my head up
Because even with my daddy gone
I'm still me, and I'll be ok [comments] => 1 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 39 [informant] => blugurl6 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Daddy is Gone

Contributed by blugurl6 on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief





Daddy is gone
And he didn't say good bye
He just packed his things and left
He didn't remind me of his love for me
I wonder if he even has it
I wonder if he even had it
All those years he spent with me
All those years I cared
I wonder,
Did it even matter?
Did he even really care?
Did I waste all of that time,
Loving a man who wasn't even my father?
Did I really waste my time,
Just to end up alone and scared?
He has ruined me!
That b**tard!
What did I do to him?!
Was it wrong of me to love a person so much?
Was it wrong of me to hug him everyday?
What the hell did I do?
Am I that bad of a daughter?
I must be
My father left me when I was young
And now my daddy did the same
My daddy is gone
And I'm trying so hard
To move on and keep my head up
Because even with my daddy gone
I'm still me, and I'll be ok




Copyright © blugurl6 ... [ 2002-07-13 19:13:21]
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Re: Daddy is Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 04:04:56 AM AEST
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very sad. you did nothing wrong. Some people have difficulties loving, when they don't love themselves.
good write, its good to jot down your emotions, believe me it helps.

jackee_line




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