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Array ( [sid] => 31890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Andúnië [time] => 2004-01-16 21:44:38 [hometext] => Inspired by seeing the Return of the King, I had to try to write some Elvish poetry [bodytext] => Shining ones pass Into the West Shining songs linger On the lips of Men Like a light lessening When sun has set Auta Eldalië Ciri Ciryar Twilight fades The shadow grows Stars falter Dimming to darkness Sad hearts yearn On forsaken shores Tulë Mornië Hostar lumbar Harps are silent In hands of men Who have not heart To sing the hope The last song That lingers on Firi estel Lantar lindar When all that is marred Shall be mended All who are hurt Shall be healed All that was darkness Shall find the dawn Alcarnen Eruo Talta mornië [comments] => 11 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 42 [informant] => fionndruinne [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 45 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology ) Andúnië Contributed by fionndruinne on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:44:38 PM in AEST Topic: mythology Shining ones pass Into the West Shining songs linger On the lips of Men Like a light lessening When sun has set Auta Eldalië Ciri Ciryar Twilight fades The shadow grows Stars falter Dimming to darkness Sad hearts yearn On forsaken shores Tulë Mornië Hostar lumbar Harps are silent In hands of men Who have not heart To sing the hope The last song That lingers on Firi estel Lantar lindar When all that is marred Shall be mended All who are hurt Shall be healed All that was darkness Shall find the dawn Alcarnen Eruo Talta mornië Copyright Â© fionndruinne ... [ 2004-01-16 21:44:38] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:12:39 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) im not really into the whole lotr , but your poem was n.i.c.e. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 05:45:37 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Elbereth, Gilthoniel... SEE! I know elvish too! Yes, very good! Good cousin... good cousin... David Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 03:31:06 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) this is very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:44:52 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) ugh, Andrew, more elves! JUST KIDDING! Great job, as always! I love the art in your style. Very beautiful, even though I am not into the whole middle earth thing! Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 02:02:56 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Your gonna have to excuse me here (it's early in the morning in England) when i read you had watched the return of the king i thought you wrote ELVIS poetry! I thought oh! that's different! now i've read it i realize its not about the king, but a very unique and well written poem about elves. I'm going back to bed! yours insanely wildejohnny. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:44:31 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Since I'm not into the whole LOTR thing, all I can say is that this poem is really pretty. Love, Chelsea Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:51:31 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) That was beautiful. I just wish I knew gaelic. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:02:40 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Wow! This is an amazing poem. I truly think you are a brilliant poet. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 04:48:31 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Talta mornië....? No i ahië ya meril cenë Ambaressë. It will happen. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 04:46:36 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) I love this! Makes me wish I had written it. I have been trying to get to learn Quenya lately. Haven't gotten anywhere yet, but this inspires me to get into it. Re: Andúnië (User Rating: 1 ) by Rous on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:53:42 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) "Inspired by seeing the Return of the King, I had to try to write some Elvish poetry" And a good job you have done. Good imagery. Thank you.

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