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Array ( [sid] => 31889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-01-16 21:33:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We have been together as we always have,
great pleasure given and received,
and when you have fallen asleep
I who has served your needs remain awake
in the dark
it was your pleasure only, not mine.
in the dark I remain with you,
my tears unseen, my sobs unheard,
for I am with you and the same time

Alone

Then you came along, we spend much time,
for a moment you seemed to be the one
but the more I looked for you
the more you made me wait
until you finally disappeared.
I know you are in bad shape,
it was not me who has done that to you,
but it makes me suffer all the time,
in the end you left me

Alone

Then the sun came up and lit my life.
I finally found what I seeked
but you were hurt, your soul distort
from pain.
I am sitting here, your body next to mine
alive, empty, close to the touch your skin
out of reach your soul.
The light you shed made the shadows deeper
than ever
and finally left me

Alone

I am envied by others for you three.
Don't they see?
All you do is leave me three times

Alone

And so I feel the sharp kiss
will not hurt me but get me what I need,
for who not is can not be

Alone
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Alone

Contributed by Avis_Nigra on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

We have been together as we always have,
great pleasure given and received,
and when you have fallen asleep
I who has served your needs remain awake
in the dark
it was your pleasure only, not mine.
in the dark I remain with you,
my tears unseen, my sobs unheard,
for I am with you and the same time

Alone

Then you came along, we spend much time,
for a moment you seemed to be the one
but the more I looked for you
the more you made me wait
until you finally disappeared.
I know you are in bad shape,
it was not me who has done that to you,
but it makes me suffer all the time,
in the end you left me

Alone

Then the sun came up and lit my life.
I finally found what I seeked
but you were hurt, your soul distort
from pain.
I am sitting here, your body next to mine
alive, empty, close to the touch your skin
out of reach your soul.
The light you shed made the shadows deeper
than ever
and finally left me

Alone

I am envied by others for you three.
Don't they see?
All you do is leave me three times

Alone

And so I feel the sharp kiss
will not hurt me but get me what I need,
for who not is can not be

Alone

Copyright © Avis_Nigra ... [ 2004-01-16 21:33:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 01:13:54 AM AEST
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that poem was powerful...

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:39:45 AM AEST
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Indeed this poem was very powerful. It was an enjoyable read. I had questions but you answered them. Nicely done.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Avis_Nigra on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:43:49 AM AEST
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Thank ou for your kind words... it in fact is the first poem I published anywhere and I was afraid it not to be good enough to do so...

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th February 2004 @ 04:15:32 AM AEST
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damn... i do believe we are witnessing the rising of a true talent...

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:12:56 AM AEST
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This poem is quite disturbing, you make such an impact, just got me sucked in further and further the more i came to the end.

I relate very well to this feeling, glad you posted it.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:00:38 PM AEST
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Wow what an amazing poem! Its really great!!! Transfers a lot of emotion!!!
Anne :D

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