Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 17:51:56 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 3180 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the breaking of a heart [time] => 2002-09-01 19:45:58 [hometext] => lost love always hurts but life goes on [bodytext] => Whipping winds blow thru your mind
Why did they leave you, so unkind?

You feel lost and confused
Your heart is deeply bruised

You feel beaten an abused
You can’t see past your darkened views

The darkness seems to creep ever closer
You feel like you gave your all to a user

You wander on thru life aimlessly
As they seem to flaunt what they did shamelessly

Your friends say time heals
But you can’t see or find a way to deal

You know in your head they are right
But your heart can’t see that sight

So you plod onward like a robot
Every time you see them it’s like a fatal shot

Each night you cry yourself to sleep
You never thought you would sink this deep

Then it slowly starts to fade
As easier comes the daily charade

Then it is all but forgot
Except for that occasional shot

Then you meet some-one who captures your heart
And suddenly you are ready for another fresh start



STR
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 22 [informant] => arakrune [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
the breaking of a heart

Contributed by arakrune on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:45:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Whipping winds blow thru your mind
Why did they leave you, so unkind?

You feel lost and confused
Your heart is deeply bruised

You feel beaten an abused
You can’t see past your darkened views

The darkness seems to creep ever closer
You feel like you gave your all to a user

You wander on thru life aimlessly
As they seem to flaunt what they did shamelessly

Your friends say time heals
But you can’t see or find a way to deal

You know in your head they are right
But your heart can’t see that sight

So you plod onward like a robot
Every time you see them it’s like a fatal shot

Each night you cry yourself to sleep
You never thought you would sink this deep

Then it slowly starts to fade
As easier comes the daily charade

Then it is all but forgot
Except for that occasional shot

Then you meet some-one who captures your heart
And suddenly you are ready for another fresh start



STR




Copyright © arakrune ... [ 2002-09-01 19:45:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: the breaking of a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wicked on Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 04:26:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very well written my friend,,,,i can relate all to well to this. hugssssssssssssss!!


Re: the breaking of a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:07:29 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very good and nicely written.


Re: the breaking of a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:12:16 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very good message i can relate


Re: the breaking of a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 12:40:20 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
The hardest thing in love is to let the other person go, and it's so hard to hang on to hope, the hope that someday someone else will touch your life as the last person did. It's awesome that you could do that.
I wish you the best.
David




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com