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Array ( [sid] => 31794 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I would my friend, If I could [time] => 2004-01-15 22:05:29 [hometext] => One of the poems, going into my book [bodytext] => If I could give to you the day of the sun,
dripping roses, on the path to heaven,
and show what I see thru my eyes,
to take away the fears,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could turn that clock of time,
and die for those in whom you loved,
and fill all your days with joy and peace,
and borrow time for the deceased,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could bring back to you,
the smile of youth,
those young and youthful years,
and give you back the time you lost,
and take out all your fears,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could be there by your side,
and gently hold you in my arms,
at least you'd know that for a day,
I'd keep you out of harm,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could bring to you a day,
to smile once again,
and show you what this world is,
with warmth, love, peace, and grace,
I would my friend, If I could,
for you!

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I would my friend, If I could

Contributed by Valerie_Pearson on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

If I could give to you the day of the sun,
dripping roses, on the path to heaven,
and show what I see thru my eyes,
to take away the fears,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could turn that clock of time,
and die for those in whom you loved,
and fill all your days with joy and peace,
and borrow time for the deceased,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could bring back to you,
the smile of youth,
those young and youthful years,
and give you back the time you lost,
and take out all your fears,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could be there by your side,
and gently hold you in my arms,
at least you'd know that for a day,
I'd keep you out of harm,
I would my friend, If I could,

If I could bring to you a day,
to smile once again,
and show you what this world is,
with warmth, love, peace, and grace,
I would my friend, If I could,
for you!

Copyright © Valerie_Pearson ... [ 2004-01-15 22:05:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful!

Kie

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:54:06 PM AEST
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W.O.W!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful poem Val ! How touching and how nicely written ! One of my faves ! I absolutely loved it !
PumpkinPie

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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lovely everyone needs a friend in this world like you.
michelle

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:18:33 AM AEST
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Excellent work maam- good luck with the book'

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:27:31 AM AEST
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Oh I know youve been writing this book cant wait! This was so beautiful,as always your work touches my heart! Christina

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:17:08 PM AEST
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Wonderful
I would love to find the exact words to say how much I enjoyed this........if I could :)

steve

Re: I would my friend, If I could (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 06:26:55 PM AEST
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This is lovely, Val...really enjoyed it..
Hugs
Jenni

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