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Array ( [sid] => 3179 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Night Before Goodbye [time] => 2002-09-01 19:42:31 [hometext] => I'm having a rough night. Tomorrow's my last day at work, which means tomorrow is the final goodbye to the girl of my dreams. I can't seem to sleep, so I figured I'd write. I just don't know what to do anymore... life without her... can't even imagine it. [bodytext] => You asked me if I expected
You to beg me to stay.
Not beg, just something,
To try to keep me from going away.
I do realize that you
May not think that’s fair.
But there are times when I feel,
As if I’m the only one who cares.
Anything would have been nice.
I don’t know if it would alter my decision.
But at least I’d know I mattered once.
That at a time, we saw a similar vision.
A vision of a future together.
A future of you and me.
All the dreams we spoke of,
Even though, now it won’t be.
I was hoping you’d do your best,
To keep us from goodbye.
Just so I would know for sure,
That they really weren’t lies.
I’d like to believe we once stood a chance.
As small as it may have been.
I would have like you to show me,
It wasn’t just my imagination.
Knowing I’d be leaving soon,
You seemed so content with my farewell.
Now you say this is hard for you too.
But to be honest, I can’t tell.
Now the times upon us.
Tomorrow, my last night at work.
I’m sure we’ll talk before I leave.
So much, this goodbye will hurt.
I still want to kiss you again.
Tomorrow I’ll want to so bad.
But you won’t let me and I really can’t.
It would make me feel so good, but so sad.
I know I’ll want to hug you.
It will be our last time.
I’ll pretend for that moment,
That you are really mine.
If I do get to hug you,
It will be so hard to let go.
I promise, I’ll try to be strong.
Though my hurt will definitely show.
You’re the only true love I’ve known.
Goodbye will be so hard to say.
I’m not even sure I can.
But I can’t see any other way.
I do believe you’re my soul mate.
It’s the only thing I really know.
Oh, how I dread tomorrows goodbye,
I really don’t want to go.

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 6067 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MisterRight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
The Night Before Goodbye

Contributed by MisterRight on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:42:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You asked me if I expected
You to beg me to stay.
Not beg, just something,
To try to keep me from going away.
I do realize that you
May not think that’s fair.
But there are times when I feel,
As if I’m the only one who cares.
Anything would have been nice.
I don’t know if it would alter my decision.
But at least I’d know I mattered once.
That at a time, we saw a similar vision.
A vision of a future together.
A future of you and me.
All the dreams we spoke of,
Even though, now it won’t be.
I was hoping you’d do your best,
To keep us from goodbye.
Just so I would know for sure,
That they really weren’t lies.
I’d like to believe we once stood a chance.
As small as it may have been.
I would have like you to show me,
It wasn’t just my imagination.
Knowing I’d be leaving soon,
You seemed so content with my farewell.
Now you say this is hard for you too.
But to be honest, I can’t tell.
Now the times upon us.
Tomorrow, my last night at work.
I’m sure we’ll talk before I leave.
So much, this goodbye will hurt.
I still want to kiss you again.
Tomorrow I’ll want to so bad.
But you won’t let me and I really can’t.
It would make me feel so good, but so sad.
I know I’ll want to hug you.
It will be our last time.
I’ll pretend for that moment,
That you are really mine.
If I do get to hug you,
It will be so hard to let go.
I promise, I’ll try to be strong.
Though my hurt will definitely show.
You’re the only true love I’ve known.
Goodbye will be so hard to say.
I’m not even sure I can.
But I can’t see any other way.
I do believe you’re my soul mate.
It’s the only thing I really know.
Oh, how I dread tomorrows goodbye,
I really don’t want to go.





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Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 08:23:43 PM AEST
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Oh!..how sad no wonder u cant sleep...and i know that goodbyes that we dont want to do are way to hard to deal with..but she sounds like she means alot so she will always be with u where it matters..that is how i handle unwanted goodbyes anyways and i hope u are ok after your tomorrow..........all the best...Tanya....:-)


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by addie on Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 02:55:58 AM AEST
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buddy , guess we both sail in the same boat .. this one was awesome .... keep up the good work ... and keep writing ..
take care


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 01:42:26 PM AEST
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Don't say gbye! Say until later!!! Because if she really is your soul mate, not even leaving will tear the two of you apart, something somewhere will push you back together! (I am the eternal optimist!) Great write Curtis! But try not to be upset, it will all work out for the best, you'll see.
Gin


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty on Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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that is a bad ass poem!! i can totally relate to it!!


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 03:51:15 PM AEST
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Hey you,
didnt want you to leave....didnt know what to do...wanted to kiss you good bye, and didnt want to let go too.


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by DDPoetry on Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 10:34:32 AM AEST
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I love this one.....pretty much says it all....good luck sweetie....D


Re: The Night Before Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:04:36 AM AEST
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Very good but sad although a hint of sweetness. I enjoyed it very much.


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