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Array ( [sid] => 31760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => goodbye to you [time] => 2004-01-15 14:58:21 [hometext] => Well here it is i lost the fight to keep the one i love, at least he is happy out of all of this [bodytext] => I cant do this anymore
My heart and soul lay on the floor

I cant spend each day crying
now im fed up of trying

if you want her then thats fine
Cause i dont want you as mine

Ive had enough you tore me apart
you ripped me up and shredded my heart

Time has come to say goodbye
no matter how many tears i cry

This is it its lets not pretend
our love story has come to an end

I loved you once but now i feel
your love for me wasnt real

Im not gona stand in your way
i will let you leave today

my love i gave was very true
I gave all i had everything to you

I cant compeate its not a game
our love will never be the same

If your love is for her but your staying with me
i would rather you say and with her you should be

the darkness i thought our love would light
now its gone and ive lost the fight

My heart, my soul ripped in two
now i say goodbye to you.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
goodbye to you

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 02:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I cant do this anymore
My heart and soul lay on the floor

I cant spend each day crying
now im fed up of trying

if you want her then thats fine
Cause i dont want you as mine

Ive had enough you tore me apart
you ripped me up and shredded my heart

Time has come to say goodbye
no matter how many tears i cry

This is it its lets not pretend
our love story has come to an end

I loved you once but now i feel
your love for me wasnt real

Im not gona stand in your way
i will let you leave today

my love i gave was very true
I gave all i had everything to you

I cant compeate its not a game
our love will never be the same

If your love is for her but your staying with me
i would rather you say and with her you should be

the darkness i thought our love would light
now its gone and ive lost the fight

My heart, my soul ripped in two
now i say goodbye to you.




Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2004-01-15 14:58:21]
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Re: goodbye to you (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:34:33 PM AEST
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This is very raw. I know what it's like to lose someone who loved another, but someday you'll be glad they're gone... because you'll meet someone who truly loves you.


Re: goodbye to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:40:13 PM AEST
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I've gone through that before. But the poem is good, although sad.


Re: goodbye to you (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 04:26:57 PM AEST
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Painful emotions expressed in an excellent write - well done ... Jan


Re: goodbye to you (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:43:49 PM AEST
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I heard a saying that I found to be very true, "No man or woman is worth your tears, and the one who is, wont make you cry."

You will find the one who's worth your tears, let your heart rest in the knowledge that though the pain is intense it is temporary and you are worthy of love.

Nice write.


Re: goodbye to you (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:30:29 PM AEST
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I love the way you rhymed!!! This poem reminds me so much of what I would like to say to my first true love and all the pain he caused... You do a great job!!




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