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Array ( [sid] => 31748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eyes penetrating souls [time] => 2004-01-15 12:30:49 [hometext] => This is kinda about my paranoid dillusions, and my feelings about them, and what I wish I could do... [bodytext] => Slipping into a dream of pyromania,
See the house go up in flames,
Buring the flesh of my paranoia
This is the house of blames

Not feeling so well again today,
Not wanting to talk,
Got nutin to say,
Because I'm scared everytime I walk
Because your eyes pierce right through me

Its kinda scary when the whole world;
Has its eyes on you,
Your breath is bated and you frustated
With everysingle person you told

Because their eyes are always piercing,
Right through your skin,
Deep inside you, always facing
The deepest darkest sin

I guess its really sad,
That the dreams in which I die,
Are the best I ever had,
Because I await my journey to the sky;
When I'm dead, I'll be glad

This deep-seeded paranoia guilt complex,
***** deep inside with my head,
Always making me want to confess,
For something that I didnt do,
So just wanting to die instead

I guess its kinda funny,
When the world turns its back to you,
Even when its sunny,
And you think your gonna get through,
It ignores any happiness that you gain,
Making you want to be in pain

But I guess its kinda stupid that simple things,
Make me wanna die and wish hell to others,
Wish when I'm Falling I start sprouting wings,
So before I hit the floor my body hovers,
While my soul follows my destiny;
And hits the floor

Sometimes you just wish you had no emotion,
So things wont hurt, and there is no pain,
Maybe one day they'll invent a potion,
To take all the pain away

So when I'm feeling down,
Like I'm dying,
And I wanna hit the ground,
I'll be flying;
To the sky I found
But that wont work,
Because my lifes to *****,
But I guess thats a perk
That everyone elses sucked
Compared to mine... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 59 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Eyes penetrating souls

Contributed by alecfernadez on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:30:49 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Slipping into a dream of pyromania,
See the house go up in flames,
Buring the flesh of my paranoia
This is the house of blames

Not feeling so well again today,
Not wanting to talk,
Got nutin to say,
Because I'm scared everytime I walk
Because your eyes pierce right through me

Its kinda scary when the whole world;
Has its eyes on you,
Your breath is bated and you frustated
With everysingle person you told

Because their eyes are always piercing,
Right through your skin,
Deep inside you, always facing
The deepest darkest sin

I guess its really sad,
That the dreams in which I die,
Are the best I ever had,
Because I await my journey to the sky;
When I'm dead, I'll be glad

This deep-seeded paranoia guilt complex,
***** deep inside with my head,
Always making me want to confess,
For something that I didnt do,
So just wanting to die instead

I guess its kinda funny,
When the world turns its back to you,
Even when its sunny,
And you think your gonna get through,
It ignores any happiness that you gain,
Making you want to be in pain

But I guess its kinda stupid that simple things,
Make me wanna die and wish hell to others,
Wish when I'm Falling I start sprouting wings,
So before I hit the floor my body hovers,
While my soul follows my destiny;
And hits the floor

Sometimes you just wish you had no emotion,
So things wont hurt, and there is no pain,
Maybe one day they'll invent a potion,
To take all the pain away

So when I'm feeling down,
Like I'm dying,
And I wanna hit the ground,
I'll be flying;
To the sky I found
But that wont work,
Because my lifes to *****,
But I guess thats a perk
That everyone elses sucked
Compared to mine...

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-01-15 12:30:49]
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Re: Eyes penetrating souls (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 02:20:10 PM AEST
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i really like your poems. its like......they scream to me, and i can relate alot. never stop. luv phil ^_^

Re: Eyes penetrating souls (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 02:57:44 PM AEST
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this is incredible I was drawn to this its so full of emotion on a deep inner level.Dont stop writing for many reasons, one because your great,two because the writing releases us from many ills and some of the most famous authors got to where they are because of this type of work!
michelle

Re: Eyes penetrating souls (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 08:53:49 AM AEST
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really good write alex!! it seems to relate to everyone in one way or the other. ur truthfullness is breathtaking in your poems.

i love it!!

MissTea

Re: Eyes penetrating souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:26:58 PM AEST
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Yeah, I agree it's like listening to certain songs in full tilt which to me makes them better. Your poems in order to be read or heard correctly would have to be screamed from the highest mountain with amplifiers big enough to throw off the planets axis. Lol.

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