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Array ( [sid] => 31723 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Crimson Dreams [time] => 2004-01-15 01:02:33 [hometext] => All love is tragic, which makes it all the more artistic [bodytext] => Spilling down my crimson dreams
sitting down silently--mind wandering,
make no mistake as my thoughts,
flying like butterflies,suck the warm nector
leaving me anaemic--senses weaken
too indolent to wipe clean the stains.
And then a face,a memory trace
a sudden lightning dispells the darkness
and the momentary flash shows me
the dream more beautiful than reality
as your prescence--like an alchemist
turm my crimson dreams to roses
and i smile like as i smell your scent
do i look like a happy child?
Hide me in your soothing warmth
melting my icebergs and the frozen butterflies
fly away--leaving me in peace.
and in this peace, i close my eyes
I will wake up again,i hope
hanging onto your faith in me
and my crimson dreams [comments] => 3 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 2 [informant] => frayedends [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My Crimson Dreams

Contributed by frayedends on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Spilling down my crimson dreams
sitting down silently--mind wandering,
make no mistake as my thoughts,
flying like butterflies,suck the warm nector
leaving me anaemic--senses weaken
too indolent to wipe clean the stains.
And then a face,a memory trace
a sudden lightning dispells the darkness
and the momentary flash shows me
the dream more beautiful than reality
as your prescence--like an alchemist
turm my crimson dreams to roses
and i smile like as i smell your scent
do i look like a happy child?
Hide me in your soothing warmth
melting my icebergs and the frozen butterflies
fly away--leaving me in peace.
and in this peace, i close my eyes
I will wake up again,i hope
hanging onto your faith in me
and my crimson dreams

Copyright © frayedends ... [ 2004-01-15 01:02:33]
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Re: My Crimson Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:57:07 AM AEST
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Most times when I read love& romance poems, they would left me felt sad or unwanted, but soemhow this one..... this one..... mmmm..... make my heart feel really warm, beautiful work.......

Re: My Crimson Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:17:11 AM AEST
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Soul piercing

The words went straight to my heart
Truly beautiful one of the best poems I have read

Get it published great work

Breathtaking Seriously brill

My kind of poem

Love Angelxx

Re: My Crimson Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:31:14 PM AEST
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I liked this. It was different yet rather good.

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