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Array ( [sid] => 31703 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without u my friend [time] => 2004-01-14 20:25:54 [hometext] => i lost him to a woman [bodytext] => Butterfly kisses sharp as a razor,
kittiens meows screams like a banchee
how could u do this to me
u left me here, to rot
now the worlds goodness is only hurt and pain
i never thought i would be like this
a whore
heartless
a wench
but when u left me here
to deal by myself
i lost my mind or what i had left
your not a man like any other
i wish i could explain to u what i am going through without u
my best friend
my only real friend
i wish i could explain to the world
a boyfriend is nothing but passing lust
but u my were more
never my boyfriend
but always there to hold me
never for sex or games like that
but always with a kiss to sooth my burning tears
never a lover
but always loved me
u left me here
and all i can do is think of u
remember the times
true happiness i only had with u
please come back to me
i cant live without u
u were my soul
u were my smile
u were the twinkle the night had to offer
ur marriage is for now baby
i know u
im a friend, i am forever [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Lessa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Without u my friend

Contributed by Lessa on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:25:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Butterfly kisses sharp as a razor,
kittiens meows screams like a banchee
how could u do this to me
u left me here, to rot
now the worlds goodness is only hurt and pain
i never thought i would be like this
a whore
heartless
a wench
but when u left me here
to deal by myself
i lost my mind or what i had left
your not a man like any other
i wish i could explain to u what i am going through without u
my best friend
my only real friend
i wish i could explain to the world
a boyfriend is nothing but passing lust
but u my were more
never my boyfriend
but always there to hold me
never for sex or games like that
but always with a kiss to sooth my burning tears
never a lover
but always loved me
u left me here
and all i can do is think of u
remember the times
true happiness i only had with u
please come back to me
i cant live without u
u were my soul
u were my smile
u were the twinkle the night had to offer
ur marriage is for now baby
i know u
im a friend, i am forever




Copyright © Lessa ... [ 2004-01-14 20:25:54]
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Re: Without u my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:31:35 PM AEST
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Oh my! very touching! Its so sad to hear. The poem is beautiful keep writing !

Anne


Re: Without u my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:14:15 PM AEST
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This is such a wonderful poem...it explains how a true relationship should be... I’m very sorry that it had to end that way for you...
Never give up on true love–


Re: Without u my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:38:35 PM AEST
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Sad but very good writing. You got your point accross magnificently.
peace, joy, luv,
emy
Sorry bout your loss of luv, hang tuff.


Re: Without u my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by sheilasin on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:52:29 AM AEST
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I feel your pain so sharply.Have been there.Stuck there with nothing but the longing.You capture the misery and longing beautifully.Hang in there


Re: Without u my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:13:45 AM AEST
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I liked this. It was very well written. Good to always be there for your friends no matter what. Nice write.




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