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Array ( [sid] => 31675 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not One Friend [time] => 2004-01-14 16:32:40 [hometext] => Sometimes, a girl can feel so...ALONE [bodytext] => I sit here drowning in my tears
My puffy eyes and stabbed emotions showing my fears
I long so much to tell someone how i feel
Because I can't handle this pressure, it's all too real
I really want to get it off my chest
Because i know if i don't my heart wont rest
And i need to let it go, it hurts too much
That i get on my knees and pray for God's touch
Please take it away, take it all away
Whatever's hurting me, please don't let it stay
Take it all away
I need someone who'll hug me when i cry
Who wont criticize me when i finally tell them why
Not my boyfriend, not any friend, will stop and hear
Hold me close 'cause i need them near
Now i sit here, feeling like it's the end
'Cause when i really need it, i have not one friend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 32 [informant] => poetic_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Not One Friend

Contributed by poetic_angel on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:32:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I sit here drowning in my tears
My puffy eyes and stabbed emotions showing my fears
I long so much to tell someone how i feel
Because I can't handle this pressure, it's all too real
I really want to get it off my chest
Because i know if i don't my heart wont rest
And i need to let it go, it hurts too much
That i get on my knees and pray for God's touch
Please take it away, take it all away
Whatever's hurting me, please don't let it stay
Take it all away
I need someone who'll hug me when i cry
Who wont criticize me when i finally tell them why
Not my boyfriend, not any friend, will stop and hear
Hold me close 'cause i need them near
Now i sit here, feeling like it's the end
'Cause when i really need it, i have not one friend

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Re: Not One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:54:05 PM AEST
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Hm, "not every day is a feast" we say here.....and I know how it sucks when there's nobody around to listen, you expressed it very well.......but hold your head up, things will turn into better again and you can bear more than you think ;)

jeanie

Re: Not One Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:35:18 PM AEST
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In the midst of tears
I feel your pain
Reach out my hand
Please, rise again

Take care
David

Re: Not One Friend (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:36:18 PM AEST
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Very touching. I know how you feel. I am often alone. Loneliness can help you to know yourself and to grow stronger, but it hurts sometimes! Let God help you. He does! Blessings

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