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Array ( [sid] => 31657 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I hate who I am [time] => 2004-01-14 12:49:59 [hometext] => I betrayed one of my friends and I hate it. I don't know how to tell her. [bodytext] => You were always there for me
You took care of me when the alcohol took over
You comforted me though hard times

I love you with all my heart
but that doesn't forgive what I have done
I have betrayed you

He was there talking to me
Before I knew it we were liplocking
His lips curessed mine

My head kept screaming I needed to stop
But lust and want over took
I never thought I could be out of control

I remember muttering we should stop
Or lips seemed to never seperate
He wispered he loved me and made me tingle

I have been trying to keep this from you
I never want to tell you and hurt you
You deserve the best but I'm just like the rest

Now it seems like every day I want to die
I almost can't believe what I did
But I know my lust got the best of me

Please I beg with all my heart forgive me
I know you will hate me for so long
But let our friendship blossom through this hard time. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 322 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Iesha [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

I hate who I am

Contributed by Iesha on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

You were always there for me
You took care of me when the alcohol took over
You comforted me though hard times

I love you with all my heart
but that doesn't forgive what I have done
I have betrayed you

He was there talking to me
Before I knew it we were liplocking
His lips curessed mine

My head kept screaming I needed to stop
But lust and want over took
I never thought I could be out of control

I remember muttering we should stop
Or lips seemed to never seperate
He wispered he loved me and made me tingle

I have been trying to keep this from you
I never want to tell you and hurt you
You deserve the best but I'm just like the rest

Now it seems like every day I want to die
I almost can't believe what I did
But I know my lust got the best of me

Please I beg with all my heart forgive me
I know you will hate me for so long
But let our friendship blossom through this hard time.

Copyright © Iesha ... [ 2004-01-14 12:49:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I hate who I am (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:02:43 PM AEST
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I hope she will forgive you, God bless and it was a good poem.

Re: I hate who I am (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:47:16 AM AEST
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You are passing through a tough time... But maybe you don't have to "hate yourself", this will not erase what's done..Very touching poem, straightforward... Hope the continuation will be a happy one for your friend will be next to you again! God bless, Vanya

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