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Array ( [sid] => 31648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Falling from Grace [time] => 2004-01-14 11:10:05 [hometext] => Uncontrolable anger fed most of this poem and made it what it was [bodytext] => Watch my fall/crash and burn,
Watch me Jump and take my turn,
To keep on falling, falling down,
Until I plumet/Hit the ground

Watch me tumble all the way,
My feelings just wont go away,
******* obsession rules my life,
Thats why I turn to my life

Have you ever felt,
like nothing helped,
That no matter what you do,
The world will crash down on you

The premonitions plauge me,
Digging at my skull daily,
And I spit out my tears,
Bloody and wretched from my fears

Now as I fall from the sky,
Now as I wait to die,
The only thing I can think of is,
How you ****** me, and all that ****

Because all I can do now is live on rage,
I cant go on, cant turn the page,
I spit in your face, to get rid of the taste,
Of your **** in my skull, burn it with mace,
You ******* idolized me,
You could ***** see,
All my stupidity,
And lets not forget Vunerability
And As I fall, wretched and dead inside,
I hope that my body will and on you,
Crush you like you crushed me to,
And then you'll have no place to hide [comments] => 4 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 6 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => ........Edited by mod_6 for language.....14-01-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Falling from Grace

Contributed by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:10:05 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Watch my fall/crash and burn,
Watch me Jump and take my turn,
To keep on falling, falling down,
Until I plumet/Hit the ground

Watch me tumble all the way,
My feelings just wont go away,
******* obsession rules my life,
Thats why I turn to my life

Have you ever felt,
like nothing helped,
That no matter what you do,
The world will crash down on you

The premonitions plauge me,
Digging at my skull daily,
And I spit out my tears,
Bloody and wretched from my fears

Now as I fall from the sky,
Now as I wait to die,
The only thing I can think of is,
How you ****** me, and all that ****

Because all I can do now is live on rage,
I cant go on, cant turn the page,
I spit in your face, to get rid of the taste,
Of your **** in my skull, burn it with mace,
You ******* idolized me,
You could ***** see,
All my stupidity,
And lets not forget Vunerability
And As I fall, wretched and dead inside,
I hope that my body will and on you,
Crush you like you crushed me to,
And then you'll have no place to hide




Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-01-14 11:10:05]
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Re: Falling from Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:42:04 PM AEST
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I'd personally like to thank the 10 people who read my poem for not commenting, and showing how really interactive this site is...


Re: Falling from Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:02:58 PM AEST
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Oh such anger and sadness! Impressive imagery! Good writing! Very touching and realistic!

Anne :D


Re: Falling from Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 03:41:55 PM AEST
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i agree alec, it is frustrating when people don't comment...i try to as much as i can, but only if i mean it and i think this 1 is great *claps*
xxx


Re: Falling from Grace (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:20:17 PM AEST
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Holy friggin crap dude... That was wicked. I saw your comment after the poem when I had already decided to comment on it. Relax on it man. I will sometimes get 20 reads before a single comment. It was frigging good. That was an awesome poem.




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