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Array ( [sid] => 31641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Invisible? [time] => 2004-01-14 09:37:33 [hometext] => This is how I feel a lot of the time. I'm never sure if people accually see me or if I dreamed myself up. Can anyone see me? [bodytext] => Am I invisible?
Or did you accidentally look straight through me?
Am I that un-noticable that you look straight past me?

I am nothing to you
You used to know me
I'm just this girl to you
But you used to love me

You say im diffrent
But I dont really care
Why's it so bad to be different?

I dont understand, why's that so bad?

You say I've changed, that I've lost myself

But really its you that lost me... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lostinmyself [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Invisible?

Contributed by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:37:33 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Am I invisible?
Or did you accidentally look straight through me?
Am I that un-noticable that you look straight past me?

I am nothing to you
You used to know me
I'm just this girl to you
But you used to love me

You say im diffrent
But I dont really care
Why's it so bad to be different?

I dont understand, why's that so bad?

You say I've changed, that I've lost myself

But really its you that lost me...

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-14 09:37:33]
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Re: Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:08:21 AM AEST
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Very nice write. I myself feel the same way at times. Someone says "Your different" and it makes me think what kind of different... Very good one. Keep up the good work.

Majestic

Re: Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:45:11 AM AEST
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This is really great, its an angry poem which just spits at you! Thats quite hard to do, which means you must really feel/or have felt this way, and dont worry, we all go invisible sometimes, but eventually people notice...

Alec Fernandez

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Re: Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:16:23 PM AEST
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I really like this ur emotion was well expressed and ive felt exactly like u so i know where ur coming from and can relate as gd mates do!
xxxx

Re: Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:16:37 PM AEST
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Good write. Mayhap you just don't realize how you've changed... Never know.

Re: Invisible? (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:41:03 AM AEST
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We all grow and change, but we need to learn to accept change and merge and grow with it. This felt like something written out of desperation, angry almost.
Take care,
David

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