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And felt your tongue fall in
The crevasses from whence the blood does stream
The gaps beneath those unstitched seams
Deadly poison stains with its taste
The skin, with its white dressings, laced
This mad world is infecting my soul
Whilst my blood bleeds from my mind’s growing hole
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Unstitched Seams

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:47:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Ever licked your skin
And felt your tongue fall in
The crevasses from whence the blood does stream
The gaps beneath those unstitched seams
Deadly poison stains with its taste
The skin, with its white dressings, laced
This mad world is infecting my soul
Whilst my blood bleeds from my mind’s growing hole

Copyright Â© afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-01-13 15:47:02]
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Re: Unstitched Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:04:59 PM AEST
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I liked this
michelle

Re: Unstitched Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:48:33 PM AEST
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this was amazing i compeletly feel what your saying--- great write...

Re: Unstitched Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:49:35 PM AEST
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Somehow that just struck me as insanely morbid... I liked it. Good write.

Re: Unstitched Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 08:34:16 PM AEST
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I think I read this before, but was to mesmerized to comment and I still don't know what to say. I loved it just isn't accurate, but I did love it. Ok I'll shut up...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Unstitched Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:25:00 PM AEST
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Wonderful words,
I love this poem because it seems to have much hidden meaning that could be interperated in many ways,
The title really caught my attention and I couldnt keep my eyes off of it.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

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