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Array ( [sid] => 31575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seventh Heaven [time] => 2004-01-13 13:14:29 [hometext] => just a little love poem... [bodytext] => You could have me
If your breath were close enough
To warm my neck, test my water
Lap the depths of me
With hungry licks and slow caresses
Tickles up my spine
I would slide upon you
Completely inspired

Entwined around
The sound of your breathing
Almost heaving
Pressed and meshed
We are skinless
In the movement
Of one rhythm
As it enters us

As you enter me
And I let you see
Beyond the fiery green
Of my eyes
Where my temperature rises
Deep inside
Where I’m wet and wild
Wanting you

To touch everything
Fingertips along my seams
Trace my dreams
With your lips
Our hips in unison

I am rocking to your music
Giving in to your song
The long strong strokes
The slips and glides
As the notes play me
To seventh heaven
To ecstasy
To blissful sighs

You’re strumming my hair
And I’m humming within
Spooned and sleepy
—Yet more alive

Than I’ve ever been

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Seventh Heaven

Contributed by manicmuze on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You could have me
If your breath were close enough
To warm my neck, test my water
Lap the depths of me
With hungry licks and slow caresses
Tickles up my spine
I would slide upon you
Completely inspired

Entwined around
The sound of your breathing
Almost heaving
Pressed and meshed
We are skinless
In the movement
Of one rhythm
As it enters us

As you enter me
And I let you see
Beyond the fiery green
Of my eyes
Where my temperature rises
Deep inside
Where I’m wet and wild
Wanting you

To touch everything
Fingertips along my seams
Trace my dreams
With your lips
Our hips in unison

I am rocking to your music
Giving in to your song
The long strong strokes
The slips and glides
As the notes play me
To seventh heaven
To ecstasy
To blissful sighs

You’re strumming my hair
And I’m humming within
Spooned and sleepy
—Yet more alive

Than I’ve ever been

Copyright © manicmuze ... [ 2004-01-13 13:14:29]
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Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:17:32 PM AEST
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This is really erotic... Its also very passionate, and I like the way you show that in the poem, and it turns out great. Its very erotic...
Keep up the good work!

Alec Fernandez

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Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:55:16 PM AEST
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mmmm mmmm hot enough to melt the snow outside ;o)

Beautiful

Larry

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:22:10 PM AEST
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Gorgeous write ... sensuous and delightful ... Jan

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:43:20 PM AEST
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very good. i liked it

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:24:48 PM AEST
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ahhhhhhhhhh steamy
michelle

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:39:58 AM AEST
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Aroused! That's what effect this poem had on me. This poem was deep and musical and surprisingly sexy in a way that most poems related to sex rarely are. The tempo is something I enjoyed here too.
I give this a 5 on the Nortiscale.
norticus

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 09:35:21 AM AEST
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(*stammering*) ohhhh..... mama....... help me..... shower!... Where is the cold shower?!........ I need..... to cool....... cool down........ (*half hour later......*)
Huuuuh, much better! Oh girl, this is the most sexy and erotic poem (note- not 'one of'!) I ever read! Damn! Where are you, I be come running! ^_^ Hehe, keep more coming!

Re: Seventh Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:35:41 PM AEST
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Nice... Nice... Very good. Ummm... I.. That was really good. I think my imagination just ran away... Bad... Lol. Great write.

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