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Array ( [sid] => 31574 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Scarlet Snow [time] => 2004-01-13 13:00:58 [hometext] => Drifting on a snowflake... [bodytext] => I think I realize, you're just a hypochondriac
And I'm the most impotent medicine
But I live inside, and I'm sure of that
No matter the answers, the question for truth strives on
I feel dead again, your world is so cold
My frostbitten corpse can't save you
But that's no excuse, for what I was told
Your gradation of life won't save you

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me?

I feel lost again, your path is so bleak
I tried to show you the way out
Are you listening? Your thoughts are so weak
Pay attention or you'll never see

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me?

Don't lie
DON'T LIE
Haggard, I sit here waiting for the end
Why isn't it over?
WHY ISN'T IT OVER?

I feel dead again, everything's undone
Untied the knots only for this?
The blood on the snow, proves that you were wrong
I can't believe that you've killed this

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 32 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Scarlet Snow

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I think I realize, you're just a hypochondriac
And I'm the most impotent medicine
But I live inside, and I'm sure of that
No matter the answers, the question for truth strives on
I feel dead again, your world is so cold
My frostbitten corpse can't save you
But that's no excuse, for what I was told
Your gradation of life won't save you

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me?

I feel lost again, your path is so bleak
I tried to show you the way out
Are you listening? Your thoughts are so weak
Pay attention or you'll never see

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me?

Don't lie
DON'T LIE
Haggard, I sit here waiting for the end
Why isn't it over?
WHY ISN'T IT OVER?

I feel dead again, everything's undone
Untied the knots only for this?
The blood on the snow, proves that you were wrong
I can't believe that you've killed this

Oh, memories...
Memories vanishing
Oh, memories...
Memories questioning
Do you love me?




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-01-13 13:00:58]
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Re: Scarlet Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:13:07 PM AEST
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this is a really outstanding piece of work, its so sad, and you can sense a sense of longing in this piece as well.
Great piece of work, and keep up the good poetry!

Alec Fernandez

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Re: Scarlet Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:39:32 PM AEST
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That was so Beutiful, it seriously made me feel all these feelings, i wanted to cry, wow, this is truly one of my favorites ever written here


Re: Scarlet Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 04:04:16 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful Dustin, about our break up, I suppose. But I loved this one, good job....


Re: Scarlet Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:29:32 PM AEST
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I liked this. It was a very good write. Sorta sucker punched me. Lol. Darkly beautiful.




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