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Array ( [sid] => 31572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confusion Ray [time] => 2004-01-13 12:48:44 [hometext] => This is just my mind speaking, I didnt have anything to do with it, except for the editing... 'They Made me do it...' [bodytext] => Confusion rides inside my mind,
Boiling my thoughts,
Raping inside

It devours my mind into pieces,
shattered steel of reality,
Confusion is my thesis

Narrows my mind to gravity,
Pulls me over and under,
Creates a black hole cavity

It divides my heart into portions,
Rips my soul into flakes,
Fills my mind with precaution

Makes me see all these faces,
Blind and hated,
Walking backwards tired paces

Makes me see the other realm,
All these Happy places,
Puts me in control at the helm

Ripps my ears from underneath me,
Death to the world and transparent,
It makes me slowly bleed

Confusion puts these thoughts inside,
Cutting at me, burning my flesh,
And then all I can do is hide

Running over my legs at once,
Break them in two,
I guess its just a hunch

That it will eat my brain,
Devour my soul,
Make me insane

So paranoid because of confusion,
Sectioned and dissasociate from you,
These images are just an illusion

Running out of places to run,
Legs so tired, heart so hurting,
My wings still work, and I fly to the sun

But I never understand all these feelings,
Burning inside me,
Raping all my healings,

So I come to you as I fall back
Of this stone floor,
Into the sky, a place which I lack

I cant seem to pull the trigger,
end these tears,
Cant; Go figure

Its hurting me making me bleed,
Confusion envoloping me,
Pull the trigger than you'll see
Whats wrong with me [comments] => 7 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Confusion Ray

Contributed by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Confusion rides inside my mind,
Boiling my thoughts,
Raping inside

It devours my mind into pieces,
shattered steel of reality,
Confusion is my thesis

Narrows my mind to gravity,
Pulls me over and under,
Creates a black hole cavity

It divides my heart into portions,
Rips my soul into flakes,
Fills my mind with precaution

Makes me see all these faces,
Blind and hated,
Walking backwards tired paces

Makes me see the other realm,
All these Happy places,
Puts me in control at the helm

Ripps my ears from underneath me,
Death to the world and transparent,
It makes me slowly bleed

Confusion puts these thoughts inside,
Cutting at me, burning my flesh,
And then all I can do is hide

Running over my legs at once,
Break them in two,
I guess its just a hunch

That it will eat my brain,
Devour my soul,
Make me insane

So paranoid because of confusion,
Sectioned and dissasociate from you,
These images are just an illusion

Running out of places to run,
Legs so tired, heart so hurting,
My wings still work, and I fly to the sun

But I never understand all these feelings,
Burning inside me,
Raping all my healings,

So I come to you as I fall back
Of this stone floor,
Into the sky, a place which I lack

I cant seem to pull the trigger,
end these tears,
Cant; Go figure

Its hurting me making me bleed,
Confusion envoloping me,
Pull the trigger than you'll see
Whats wrong with me

Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-01-13 12:48:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:23:18 PM AEST
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Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:26:52 PM AEST
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reminds me of a poet :)

i've been to these places and writing about them is the only thing to do.

Strong and intense poem, well done.
~ Wendy

Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by MissTea on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:34:29 PM AEST
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absolutly awesome alex! now one of my personal favourites out of ALL the poems i've read!!
I loved it, absolutly LOVED it!!
well done alex!! well done

MissTea

Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:59:44 PM AEST
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You are a very talented poet. Deep, dark, formidable & filled with pain. You expressed it beautifully.

Kie

Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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My wings still work as I fly to the sun, extremely fantastic wording here, very powerful, as we have all been there, thanks for sharing this gem of yours, keep up the great work, take care Val

Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:18:55 AM AEST
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wow! thats all i can say, you are a great writer. never stop. such a powerful poem.

Re: Confusion Ray (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:22:51 PM AEST
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Alec... Dude that blew me away. I absolutely loved it from the opening comment to the last lines. This was like pure genious. I think you are an awesome poet. Rock on man.

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