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leaving the safe secure world i always knew
walking on a tight rope of promises that just might break
i pray you dont cause my earth to shake
or steal my hope
or cause terrible tears that would make me choke
love isn't fair always
because i know if you let me down i'll love you anyway
im going to put my precious trust in you
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putting my trust in you

Contributed by loopylou on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i'm waking up to a world deeply interested in you
leaving the safe secure world i always knew
walking on a tight rope of promises that just might break
i pray you dont cause my earth to shake
or steal my hope
or cause terrible tears that would make me choke
love isn't fair always
because i know if you let me down i'll love you anyway
im going to put my precious trust in you
please don't let all these feelings through

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2004-01-13 07:36:08]
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Re: putting my trust in you (User Rating: 1 )
by Manicmuze on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:12:14 AM AEST
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I like this.... we have to take those chances and allow ourselves to be vulnerable in order to truely experience the joy love has to offer i think. Sweet poem, nicely done,
~ Wendy

Re: putting my trust in you (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:17:50 AM AEST
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A really sweet poem, thats always the problem about passionate people, trust others too easily and too much.... I like it alot, keep it up! ^_^

Re: putting my trust in you (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:58:06 AM AEST
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Trust is a hard thing to give another. Your poem touched my heart and I felt your strength shining thru your poem.

Kie

Re: putting my trust in you (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:30:26 PM AEST
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Rolling the dice and letting the chips fall where they may. Good write. I hope it works out for you.

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