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Array ( [sid] => 31531 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out of the Pain of hells hole! [time] => 2004-01-12 22:55:26 [hometext] => Read it and you can tell me what you think it describes. Mainly it is just thoughts off my head. Support the poets, be interactive. Comment and rate our work. MaJ [bodytext] => ------_____---------

In this turbulent world, no one else could see,
An unfamiliar place of plexus misery.
Confusion erased her name from my mind,
Terror and hopelessness was all I could find.

Ignorant comments reaped frustration and pain,
Would I ever be in her world, ever again?
Afraid to hold her, afraid I would fall,
Off the moving carpet which was still to all.

Disturbance dictated, sweat smeared my palms,
I wanted to hold her steady in my arms.
Howling in anguish for I could not cry,
Irrational grieving, no reasons why.

Phobic of everything and everyone near,
In a time of ruin, torment and fear.
Morbid anxiety took hold of me strong,
I lost my loves, Yet I did nothing wrong.

Dejected and hollow, with progress slow,
A love for a woman that just wouldn’t show.
Safely in my heart I cherished her with care,
I was once her lover in my own turmoil of total despair.

Recovery hindered by prejudice remarks,
The soul inside me took walks to the parks.
Despondent dispirited by words unjust,
I learned to forgive and in myself to trust.

Courage gradually led me to a path of new,
Where grass became green and the sky became blue.
Learning to live again now an obsession,
My love I missed – in a world of depression.

A life was taken to a traumatic hell,
Painful to recall, painful to tell,
As far as you can fall, is as far as I fell,
Tears from this lonely soul – now trying to live life well.

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Out of the Pain of hells hole!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



------_____---------

In this turbulent world, no one else could see,
An unfamiliar place of plexus misery.
Confusion erased her name from my mind,
Terror and hopelessness was all I could find.

Ignorant comments reaped frustration and pain,
Would I ever be in her world, ever again?
Afraid to hold her, afraid I would fall,
Off the moving carpet which was still to all.

Disturbance dictated, sweat smeared my palms,
I wanted to hold her steady in my arms.
Howling in anguish for I could not cry,
Irrational grieving, no reasons why.

Phobic of everything and everyone near,
In a time of ruin, torment and fear.
Morbid anxiety took hold of me strong,
I lost my loves, Yet I did nothing wrong.

Dejected and hollow, with progress slow,
A love for a woman that just wouldn’t show.
Safely in my heart I cherished her with care,
I was once her lover in my own turmoil of total despair.

Recovery hindered by prejudice remarks,
The soul inside me took walks to the parks.
Despondent dispirited by words unjust,
I learned to forgive and in myself to trust.

Courage gradually led me to a path of new,
Where grass became green and the sky became blue.
Learning to live again now an obsession,
My love I missed – in a world of depression.

A life was taken to a traumatic hell,
Painful to recall, painful to tell,
As far as you can fall, is as far as I fell,
Tears from this lonely soul – now trying to live life well.





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Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole! (User Rating: 1 )
by Naoko on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 11:20:31 PM AEST
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I enjoyed that suprisingly, I did'nt think I would at first baised on the title...

I really like the line "The soul inside me took walks to the parks" in particular.


Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole! (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:06:28 AM AEST
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I am happy that you liked it, and appreciate your honesty in your comments. I guess the old syaing "Dont judge a book by its' cover" goes well in this case :D Thank you again for your comments..

Majestic


Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole! (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 01:06:55 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. I like how you wrote it out. It was good. Very good use of words. Wasn't put of by the title though lol.




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