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Array ( [sid] => 31487 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Not A Poet [time] => 2004-01-12 15:14:16 [hometext] => hey, guys, please, make comments! to all you read, comment it! even if you didn't like it, just tell me that it was crap or anything ;) I wanna know what you think! [bodytext] => I'm Not A Poet

I sit in my room
Alone like I am all days
Your picture is in my head
I'm by my comp
Keyboard is the only thing I can touch
But not you
Not your hand
Not your face
Not your lips

Your picture is like Mona Lisa
Your eyes follow me everywhere I go
Leonardo was a poet among painters
I am one of millions
Despite that I ask my love of you
And I ask you to ask your love of me

Love is a negative and the distance develops it
All the time I try not to think of my sorrow
I'm getting drunken with a roll
I'm weak
You're my drug that keeps me sane
I know you are stronger
So I put my trust in you

And for one thousand three hundred and fifty-sixth time I repeat to myself:
"Dulcis in fundo"

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I'm Not A Poet

Contributed by jeanie on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:14:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'm Not A Poet

I sit in my room
Alone like I am all days
Your picture is in my head
I'm by my comp
Keyboard is the only thing I can touch
But not you
Not your hand
Not your face
Not your lips

Your picture is like Mona Lisa
Your eyes follow me everywhere I go
Leonardo was a poet among painters
I am one of millions
Despite that I ask my love of you
And I ask you to ask your love of me

Love is a negative and the distance develops it
All the time I try not to think of my sorrow
I'm getting drunken with a roll
I'm weak
You're my drug that keeps me sane
I know you are stronger
So I put my trust in you

And for one thousand three hundred and fifty-sixth time I repeat to myself:
"Dulcis in fundo"

Copyright Â© jeanie ... [ 2004-01-12 15:14:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm Not A Poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:18:34 PM AEST
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its different i liked it

michelle

Re: I'm Not A Poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:36:40 PM AEST
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Jeanie-
You are a poet. If you can write from somewhere deep within you than it exists. The more you write the more comfortable you will become. Have faith in yourself, you're doing great.

Kie

Re: I'm Not A Poet (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:21:52 PM AEST
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This one was actually good. Err I mean in comparison to the last one you just posted. I don't want you to take that the wrong way. I just like this one way more. These lines for sure got me
'I'm weak
You're my drug that keeps me sane
I know you are stronger
So I put my trust in you '
Nice write.

Re: I'm Not A Poet (User Rating: 1 )
by jeanie on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:49:37 PM AEST
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Thanks for all comments :D:D
To Cobalt : don¨t worry, I'm super okay with you telling me your opinion, I appreciate it and I like to hear what you think, thanks :)

jeanie

Re: I'm Not A Poet (User Rating: 1 )
by dAWn on Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:21:41 AM AEST
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distance is like river without a bridge. You can and at the same time, you cannot cross it....
Ok, this was a lame coment, but I think this will be my favourite (on the toppic of 'distance' of course ;P)

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