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Array ( [sid] => 31474 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lost inside myself [time] => 2004-01-12 13:36:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I dont know this place...

Distorted signs and invisible doors...

Im lost with no way to turn,

Pull me out of the darkness.....

Turn on the light,

And drive these tears, my fears away...

I dont want to be alone,

I need you to save me again...

But my hero is gone,

Im lost...im nothing...

Nothing to turn to...

No one to cry to....

No one to laugh with...

Nothing to do...

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lost inside myself

Contributed by lostinmyself on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:36:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I dont know this place...

Distorted signs and invisible doors...

Im lost with no way to turn,

Pull me out of the darkness.....

Turn on the light,

And drive these tears, my fears away...

I dont want to be alone,

I need you to save me again...

But my hero is gone,

Im lost...im nothing...

Nothing to turn to...

No one to cry to....

No one to laugh with...

Nothing to do...

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-12 13:36:28]
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Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:50:44 PM AEST
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Very sad! I love the way you wrote it, as if you're moving. First full of hope and then desperation hmmm i like it! Keep on writing

Anne

Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:07:41 PM AEST
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Brought a tear to me eye...

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Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by pooja on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:09:52 AM AEST
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short and sad. very well written. I can connect to the person in the poem .

Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:37:13 PM AEST
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I was going to point out a few lines I liked but after the second read I liked it all too much. Very nice write. Sad but good.

Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:11:26 AM AEST
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So full of despair and, well, loss. Lovely in its simplicity.
Stitch

Re: lost inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:27:57 AM AEST
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Ah, I see. That explains your name quite well, and it explains you too. Be strong, have faith, life does have a nice plot of land called peace with your name written on it!
Take care, friend.
David

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